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Dream's Passion |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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Your eyes haunt me through twilight's mist, Staring seductively into my soul. Beautiful lashes blink oh so slowly, Causing sweat to break on my skin. My dreaming body twists and rolls, Throwing sheets and pillows to the floor, As tangible emotions pierce my thoughts. I live this dream of you in perfect reality, Knowing your touch, your kiss. My arms embrace you, longing to hold you forever, Squeezing tight the air around me. My lips seek yours, fervently racing Up your neck, and finally, Finally, I wake, Soaked in my dream's passion. Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well...ahem...sounds like a peaceful awakening...grin...and not a bad nights' sleep either! Hmmm. Now why can't I do that? A particularly persuasive poem...especially the um, climax... *winks* Enjoyed the read, and thanks for tolerating my naughtiness! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh, this IS a bit racey..  i enjoyed this soooo much! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I, for one, think your dreams were quite satisfying!!! Bet you felt all relaxed when you woke up!! Great writing!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh, raccoon.... You're gonna make me get out my giant eraser if you keep this up...  |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Would never push you that far...*devilish grin* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, I believe I have recently had a similar dream. This was great, just hot enough.. catalinamoon |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
HEY MI !!!!whoops! shhhhh... sorry to scream... gosh scared myself... where ya been??? this poem is HOT! great to see you, excellent writing, my friend... stick around for a while this time, k? ((((hugs)))) ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Thanks for all the replies. I know, I know, I'm not old enough to be having these kind of dreams. *sigh* Oh well, where you can't dream, you can imagine. *grins* Hey Doreen, nice to see you too! About hurt my eyes when you erupted like that. *grins* Nan, nan, nan, na..... Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true? |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so what your saying is you tossed and turned and yearned! And can I say what a dream weaver! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
MI!!! MI!!!! MI!!!!! Where ya been? Kewl poem, you've gotten better dear friend. It's been awhile since I have had the pleasure of reading your work. Oh and YES YOU ARE TOO DARNED YOUNG TO DREAM LIKE THIS! Hmmph! I'm gonna tell yer Mama  *smooches and hugs* Welcome back and PLEEEEEEASE stay!?? ~Heather |
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grandiloquent Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 104Midwest America |
I was feeling a little cold before I read this, and now I feel the need to loosen my collar and all sorts of other inappropriate bindings. God, inventive and gorgeous! Intruder, you’ve inspired me to take a nap!  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
And it had to be a dream. Darn... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes yes..This is inspiration to last a while. I adore this one, and you know it. Miss your words and yourself! E-mail me sometime, and fill me in on your busy life. ((HUGS)) |
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