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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
I HAVE HELD RESTLESS BEAUTY IN MY ARMS HER LOVE A GUN THAT DRAWS ADRINALIN IN FUN AND RED AS BLOOD FROM A BROKEN HEART HER GRACE OF A SILENT SUNSET THROUGH THE HISS OF GRASS ACROSS A LONELY PEACEFULL BEACH BUT ONLY WITH HER WAS IT GOOD ONLY WITH HER DID I KNOW SHE WAS THERE FOR AS GONE SHE WAS AND AWAY I FELT KNEW I TO OTHERS SHE GAVE HESELF SO WHY NOT HATE ONE THATS SO ALLURING SO DEADLY FOR TRULY LOVE IS BLIND AS IT IS NOW AND STILL URNS TO GO BACK FOR EVER ANY THING I WOULD DO TO LIVE TOGATHER AGAIN WITH YOU |
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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
not bad, well at least I liked it oh well=()= |
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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
I think you guys are trying to black list me, so fine I'll go but there is a big ol tear in my eye to all of you I sadly so good bye |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
looks like im following you around today! dont feel rejected...sometimes things get so busy poems slip through unnoticed...dont think of that as a reflection on your talent..dont worry, stick around and keep sharing with us.... ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Jaysun I have experienced these feelings and the feelings of love linger of course because you really loved and appreciated certain qualities about her and someday if it is truly over in her heart and you can let go then you will be able to redirect all this love in your heart to the one that will desire and appreciate it. That is the beauty of Love...it is yours to share...James |
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