Open Poetry #9 |
The tempest and The eve of hopes |
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
The Tempest She let loose her pain in my arms that of knowing and not wanting to say to utter those words we both felt there the ones that let us drift away. Not because of anger nor temperment souls unrest simply completed what thoughts we had done and found our love strained though still won. Of times we could remember with smiles rides along the coast on dazzeling tides or my childrens faces that brighten my day as they kiss my cheek and go their way. These all will remain deep in my soul as to will my love for this woman I know while we begin a new chapte in our lives our friendship must gorw stronger in hard times. For now we hold onto what we can those morning hopes at our command as we simplify our drastic pace and learn how to love, in a new way. The Eve of Hopes A beauty of dark eyes and skin looking radiant from across the room and the power for which she did hold completed me and filled my soul. That first eve bliss that we shared of passions unfurled in sweat and lips was more than we both understood as our heart became one in evenings gold. We melted into a single source of light from which the night became our lives and sacred moments turned to love that filled our bodies dreams made of. It is this that I shall always keep within my hearts rythm as it beats as everytime I see her eyes all of her love shall flood my mind. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed the read. nicely written. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MichaelG~ This is so tender that it reaches a fragile ache. Very tenderly penned. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
Michael... your reflections of love are written with such poetic grace you write with so much soul.. must mean you are a poet huh? *smile* love these two gems. my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
So beautifully worded Michael. Memories are the one thing no one can take away...... Hugs, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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