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Found a poem I wrote in the 5th grade
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Found a poem I wrote in the 5th grade |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
How do I tell the one I love I love her with all my heart If I keep looking for a sign from above In the end I will never start The words themselves seem simply enough said But my tongue gets tied easily indeed I wish on my face it could be read But in the end love can not read So I'll make sure I'm always around And hope her love finds me If I keep up that aproach I'll never be found For in the end love can not see So how do I tell her I realy love her And without her love I will die I just have to tell her I Love Her Or in the end love will pass me by (I never told her. I was to shy. So, that particular love passed me by.) Love is the law, love under will. |
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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
Not bad at all for fith grade or any grade for that matter, Some peope are just gifted. hope to see some more recent writings =)(= |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Ahh! the tongue-tied schoolboy....... I married one of those!!!! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Maybe you should have just given her the poem. It worked for me. Loved it, by the way. Dee |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting that you had those desires at such a young age...you missed your opportunity but I'll bet you soon learned not to let new opportunities go by... When we reach out to someone that doesn't always guarantee they will reach back... this is the beauty of Love....when we finally find the one that is also reaching out to us...James |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Thank you for your kind replies. Love is the law, love under will. |
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