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I Need You
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I need you Like the flowers need the rain I will never be the same Til you're here with me again I need you. Time and circumstances keep us far apart But everyday you're here in this lonely womans heart I need you I live each day believing in our lovers dream Its all I have to hold to through each lonely night it seems I need you Like a tree blown by the wind We wont break, we'll always bend I will love you til the end I need you Theres not more I can do to make our someday come to be So until that day comes round I'll be waiting patiently I need you I'm just a shadow of the woman you once thought you knew Because the best part of me is living there with you I need you Like the flowers need the rain I will never be the same Til you're here with me again I need you I love you |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh Paula...I can feel the tears in this one sweetie...sending hugs your way on angel wings...keep setting them free in your poetry and past the pain feel the healing. There is beauty in this piece...the beauty that's within you Paula. Take care of you! |
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CAMERON UNDERWOOD Junior Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 26 |
Oh,....tear. I feal your pain, as mine is same. Its such an amazing experience of being with someone that is so special. You sometimes find that not only does that person bring out the best in you; but they even bring out parts of you that you never even thought you had. And when they are far away you feel helpless like your an empty shell of what you once were; dying in despair and lonliness. I wish I could hold my angel (Kelley) for even 5 seconds and I would die a happy man. I hope everything works out for you. Cameron (Sleepless in Portland) |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This is beautiful....lovely peice....  Julie :) |
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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
Paula "Like a tree blown in the wind we wont break, we'll always bend" I will love you to the end" my admiration to this line I enjoy your style of writing, the way it is broken up, it shows so much expression, your poem makes me sad though it reminds me of one of my poems about lost love=)(= |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, sending you warm hugs and soft smiles, this is a remarkable piece. I can feel your longing, I hope that everything will turn out well for you. In the meantime this is a beautiful poem and excellant testimony of your love. Hold the dream, touch the rainbow, and take care. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello, my twin..... This one sings to me like a song yet to be. It is soft and sweet and has such a need to be heard. You are such a great writer that my eye always looks for your name, so that I can read your thoughts again. Live long and prosper...... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Paula, this is an excellent poem... the longing is clearly evident... reads like a song though... and a good one at that Take Care, My regards, sudhir |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
This is excellent Paula....well done |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is precious Paula. You know how much I want a woman to tell me she needs me...and for me to believe her words...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Holly...Thank you for the hugs dear one, you know I appreciate your thoughts and hugs Cameron...never give up friend...just keep hope alive and you will hold your love again JulieAnn...thank you for reading Jaysun...thank you for your kind words and I look forward to reading your poems Marsha ...thank you for the hugs...Im really NOT sad...thanks for your sweet words Sunny girl...it IS a song...one I can hear as clear as anything...I just wish I could put it to music...Beam me up Scotty Sudhir...I am so happy you could hear the music...thank you English Rose...thank you James...she is out there...and when you find her its gonna be spectacular |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
very nice. I can feel the pain and the longing. Great use of words to express your feelings. Alan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Paula, again someone here has expressed my life so perfectly. It is amazing the way that keeps happening. I feel exactly this way about someone. I hope you can have your love. Take care. Sandra |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your sincerity shines through in this one, Paula.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Alan...thank you I appreciate your words and that you could feel even some of what I was saying...I look forward to reading your poems soon. Sandra...dont we always think we are the only ones who have these feelings? Then you come across something that just SCREAMS your heart...I am happy that i could touch you with this, and believe me I have the love of my life... Mr Balladeer...its a honour sir to have you read my work...Thank you |
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