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Puppy Dog Eyes |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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She looked at you with puppy dog eyes wondering if ~ or when you'd ever realize She was so in love it was always you all the while breaking her heart that you hadn't a clue She wanted you so much and was quite willing to prove Every day she hoped you'd make your move She waited so long still you could never see She, with puppy dog eyes ~ your missed Destiny ~ -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Destiny comes in full circle trust Fate smiles upon those with heart Love lost in anothers forsaken lust Will shine tomorrow as today will part Eyes so blind that one cannot see Closed to love that breathes so pure Will one day see past their insecurity When true heart beats forever to endure Lovely write and NEVER give up hope in what is meant as destiny.....LOVED this one. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sue - A neat poem about lost opportunity as a result of expectations instead of actions. It does remind me of something I read about men in general - Men need to be needed, but will run for their lives from a woman who is needy. Puppy dog eyes are a sure sign of "needy." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ thank you for the wonderful reply  LJA~ Needy? Na, more like wanting to give but afraid of rejection or maybe he was just too blind to see what was infront of him....women need to be needed too..... -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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