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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-09-12 04:27 AM

A flame wanders from her hand
to touch the light trip in this domain
where fantasies in rythem dare not cease
our torture for love does indeed.

And changes made in the harmonies of time
that case our minors and majors of rhyme
were not the powers of the stanza known
and songs of pleasure brought out their own.

Will those simple silences made their way
to hearts content of long ago days
pressing pastures of candle light themes
that still the air of golden dreams.

As my hand radiates to a new song of hope
those chances become my cry of rebirth
that past away my foolish lit dreams
and cleared my thoughts of my enemies.

Which by pleasure or pain I did bring in
my souls content of rythem I thought I could end
but nothing could ever allow me to stray this course
of new beginings and lasting dreams I forgot.

And the hands I see in rythems run by
are those of my time that I now abide
and pray you peace to your hearts gatherd will
and love me always as I love you still.

shadow of poetry
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 76
midwest usa

1 posted 2000-09-12 09:39 AM

As my hand radiates to a new song of hope
those chances become my cry of rebirth
that past away my foolish lit dreams
and cleared my thoughts of my enemies.

Which by pleasure or pain I did bring in
my souls content of rythem I thought I could end
but nothing could ever allow me to stray this course
of new beginings and lasting dreams I forgot.

And the hands I see in rythems run by
are those of my time that I now abide
and pray you peace to your hearts gatherd will
and love me always as I love you still.

==================
that last exquisite verse says it all.
so very beautiful ...

my sister is the poet
I am but a shadow.
by the light of poetry
I read then dream

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-09-12 09:45 AM

MG~ This IS beautiful!

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-09-12 11:05 AM

Your pen has served you well today. Your last two lines say it all. Wonderful, as always.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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