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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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* I recently quit a really bad nicotine habit.....this is my way of saying good bye to a bad habit!  At last I cry I could never see screaming in my heart you can't have me! At last I cry forever and a day now would you just get the hell away! At last I cry you've no hold on me no chains about my soul is free! At last I cry I'm done with you no more addiction this game is through! -SEA- [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 09-12-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sea, very neatly written and it could have been any sort of habit, you were writing about. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful write and I may borrow this when I decide to quit.  . I send you my best in your endeavor to quit and I KNOW that you will make it through just fine. Way to go!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry~ yes, I guess it could, thanks Mark~ thank you so much for the encouragement!! I'm on day 9 "cold turkey" you should give it a go, I only had little fits for the first 4 days LOL -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
SEA ... no matter what the vise, this read would work well for me ... nice write ... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
WTG girl...Im proud of you and I know you can do it... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MA Miller~ I'm glad you liked this, thank you Paula~thank you, I'm trying so hard, I even went to drinking tea and cut the coffee(OMG)Talk about a major change up!  -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Congratulations and good luck on the changes you're making... Some things don't change, though... Not even nicotine fits keep you from being a sweetie. *G* I enjoyed your poem! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Suthern~ thank you so much....I feel really good about the changes I'm making in my life....I want to be here a long time.......the nicotine fits were pretty funny actually, I just made up my mind enough was enough, and thank you for the sweetie part -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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