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Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-09-11 04:35 PM


Hello Passions, I'm very sorry that I haven't posted on here in a while...I'm just going through the aftermath of my stolen computer...I'll try to post as much as I can so please, bear with me.

Just when my sun no longer shined
and when dark clouds invaded my mind,
an angel came to make my skies shine.
Just when my stars were no longer bright,
just as my anger grew dark as night,
an angel stepped into my life,
and made everything right
and because of her,
my days have become bright.
Just when my heart could no longer beat,
there came an angel to save me,
and set my soul free.
Whenever I cried,
she just held me in her arms,
wiped the tears from my eyes,
and said,"everything will be alright".
Because of her, my heart is at peace,
like quiet waves in the sea
as I'm radiating with gratefulness
because, I thank God every night,
for sending the angel, that saved my life.

© Copyright 2000 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2000-09-12 12:57 PM


Nate... it's good to see you here again!!!

and aren't you the lucky one?? this is a very special piece and i'm so glad you shared it here with us
  

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-09-12 01:44 AM


Nate,
I haven't read you work before, but I look forward to reading more, if they are all this good.

Be well
Kethry

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-09-12 06:27 AM


Nate this is beautiful writing...and thank God for angels...James
Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2000-09-14 04:46 PM


Thank you Doreen, Kethry, and Jimmy, for your awesome comments.

Nathan

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