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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-09-11 10:29 AM


Welcome to our song, where all hearts can join in and together we will play a symphony of love......
[Written together for you,
by Sunny1 and Bill Charles]    


[She]
You play upon my heart, like the strumming of
a sweet guitar…
My ears hear the sound of your gentle voice…
And I know I will never tire of listening…


[He]
Your heart did I steal, with my soft
     guitar melody…
Listen to what your ears perceive, the
soft whispers from my gentle voice…


[She]
You touch my heart, and it starts to sing your
praises…
You’ve struck its chord, and it responds in
harmony…
A song of love takes form within my soul…


[He]
A heart of tenderness does it sing,
all love praises from me…
Chords I have strummed, a melody
     you with I,
Souls mesh, love forms, in pleasant
     harmony…


[She]
Make me your song and take my notes of love
to you…
Play me into your life’s own sweet melody…
Listen to the joy as our two hearts sing…
Make me your song…


[He]                        
The song that I play, love notes to you,
strumming a melody, two lives, one,
Hearts sing, and joy is ecstasy,
as you become my song…


We thank you for singing along!  


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-09-11 11:02 AM


YES OH YES!!!!!!!! glady will I sing with you...beautiful
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-09-11 11:38 AM



Hi Paula....
            I can hear your beautiful voice and the harmonies sound so sweet!!!!!
              Thank you, twin!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2000-09-11 07:53 PM


Hi Sunny,
Thanks for working together to put this one to paper. I love it, and have to say that you are just one great talent. Thanks Sunny, let's try another.

Bill

ddgoose
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-09-11 08:02 PM


Sunny

I can hear the melody coming through the computer now.  Sounds great.  What are you two going to try next - hmmmmmmmmmmmm!

didi

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-09-11 11:00 PM


  Hi Bill.....
             This poem would be nothing without the beauty of BOTH parts, and you made that happen, my friend!!
         Yes, let's do try more...I'm ready!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
6 posted 2000-09-11 11:06 PM



  Hi didi....
             It's good to see you here.....I'm not sure what's next, but it will be fun!!
                 Thank you!!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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