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Whisper Your Desires
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Whisper Your Desires |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Whisper Your Desires Whisper your desires to the summer’s evening breeze Not so the hazy moon will ever hear Tell me in a way that I will comfort all your needs And know your wants by simply being near Whisper your desires in the silence of the hour Not with words, nor soothing hand nor fingertips Press my soft against the solid of your power And let me know the want beyond your lips Let me free to wander through the canyons of my mind To follow in the flow of passions fires And when the flesh on flesh has sweetly ripened on the vine When we have reached the tender mystic peak of love’s design When we, as one, are in our own way numbly intertwined Then in that moment whisper your desires Elizabeth Santos |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Good morning, lady. This is lusciously lovely. And I'm barely above a whisper ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
one thing I could never do was whisper my desires, nevertheless there's a lot of wisdom here. You can sure cook Liz..!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely poetry and with the pleasing grace as always... Liz, My regards, sudhir |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Liz; This beautiful poem is so romantic in a deep spiritual mingling of two souls truly knowing loves deepest passions. Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Whats that... Lucky says this is about cooking and I thought it was about making Love...perhaps cooking while wearing red lingerie...James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Powerful, passionate ... and a positively pleasurable read Liz! You've captured the magnetism of a special moment in these words ... elegantly written, with a saucy edge, loved it!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love this one so much! Sweet and tender, you write love poetry just so that it speaks to my heart. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
A tender romantic poem. Lovely |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh how I adore this one... Written with such tenderness... This one goes in2 library Coco Thanks Elizabeth 4 another gem! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
"whispering"...I want to write as flawlessly as you. Excellent piece once again and now It think you will have a shelf all your own in my library. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful my friend. . . Simply wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--so tender and softly sensuous is this poem....it speaks to my heart...love it! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweetly tender, Lady Elizabeth...lovely through and through... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"and let me know the want beyond your lips"...wow, what a romantic line. Liz, this is just too lovely, my friend. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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