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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-09-11 03:06 AM


Whisper Your Desires

Whisper your desires to the summer’s evening breeze
Not so the hazy moon will ever hear
Tell me in a way that I will comfort all your needs
And know your wants by simply being near

Whisper your desires in the silence of the hour
Not with words, nor soothing hand nor fingertips
Press my soft against the solid of your power
And let me know the want beyond your lips

Let me free to wander through the canyons of my mind
To follow in the flow of passions fires
And when the flesh on flesh has sweetly ripened on the vine
When we have reached the tender mystic peak of love’s design
When we, as one, are in our own way numbly intertwined
Then in that moment whisper your desires

Elizabeth Santos  

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-11 03:11 AM


Elizabeth~
Good morning, lady.
This is lusciously lovely.
And I'm barely above a whisper
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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2 posted 2000-09-11 03:40 AM


one thing I could never do was whisper my
desires, nevertheless there's a lot of wisdom here. You can sure cook Liz..!!!


Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2000-09-11 04:18 AM


Lovely poetry and with the pleasing grace as always...

Liz,
My regards,
sudhir

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-09-11 04:44 AM


Dear Liz; This beautiful poem is so romantic in a deep spiritual mingling of two souls truly knowing loves deepest passions. Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-09-11 05:53 AM


Whats that... Lucky says this is about cooking and I thought it was about making Love...perhaps cooking while wearing red lingerie...James
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-09-11 07:05 AM


Wow! Powerful, passionate ... and a positively pleasurable read Liz! You've captured the magnetism of a special moment in these words ... elegantly written, with a saucy edge, loved it!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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7 posted 2000-09-11 02:50 PM


I love this one so much!  Sweet and tender, you write love poetry just so that it speaks to my heart.  
Victoria
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8 posted 2000-09-11 02:57 PM


A tender romantic poem. Lovely  
CocoBaci
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9 posted 2000-09-11 04:57 PM


Oh how I adore this one...
Written with such tenderness...

This one goes in2 library
Coco

Thanks Elizabeth 4 another gem!

Mark Bohannan
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10 posted 2000-09-11 05:09 PM


"whispering"...I want to write as flawlessly as you.  Excellent piece once again and now It think you will have a shelf all your own in my library.
Sven
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11 posted 2000-09-11 06:53 PM


Just wonderful my friend. . .

Simply wonderful. . .

--------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Martie
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12 posted 2000-09-11 07:33 PM


Liz--so tender and softly sensuous is this poem....it speaks to my heart...love it!
Sunshine
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13 posted 2000-09-11 09:24 PM


Sweetly tender, Lady Elizabeth...lovely through and through...
Auguste
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14 posted 2000-09-12 03:56 AM


"and let me know the want beyond your lips"...wow, what a romantic line.  Liz, this is just too lovely, my friend.

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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