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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2000-09-11 01:58 AM




Loony Luna
Lavishly Lighting
Lovers Lanes Lovingly
Leaving Laconically-Laced
Leaping Long-Legged Lovelies
Lackadaisically Left Lacking
Longing Little Lovemaking
Lovers Linger Lopsided
Lotsa Love Left
La-La Luna




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-09-11 01:59 AM


Oh what a glorious moon you place high in my sky tonight
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-11 02:26 AM


Paula~
Glad to catch
you in the glow
Thanks for being
my middle of the
night buddy
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2000-09-11 03:10 AM


You've got me smiling at 3:00 in the morning
Quite equiped you are to quip in quiet hours so quickly of la luna's lullaby
You just never quit
I la la love ya
Liz

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4 posted 2000-09-11 03:21 AM


~Lizzie~
La-La Luna
Lovely Light Lit
Laughing Luna Love
Lil' Lilting Laughter
Loony Luna Laugh
La Luna Love
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-09-11 04:51 AM


~Marge~
little
luna low
lies like lovely
lover's
laze

you are so full of the neatest ideas! love this one.  Ellie

tracie66
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6 posted 2000-09-11 05:01 AM


Lovely little Luna Lullaby
loudly leeping luna lightrays
Lovingly liquidized like lagoons
looming lucidly lunatic



Mmmmm a mad woman penned this  (tee hee)


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2000-09-11 05:15 AM



~Marge~

behind summer clouds
back-lit in mesmerised glow
moon comes out to play

~Sudhir~



Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-09-11 07:19 AM


Oh boy ... enjoyed the clever poem Marge, and all the wonderful responses back and forth. I fear all the "L"'s of the English language are soon to be used up! Loved this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2000-09-11 09:28 PM


~*~
Lovely Loony
Lyricists,Ellie~,Tracie~
Sudhir~ and Kit~ all going
straight to "L" over a Little
Lilting Luna Lullaby Looming
Lightly Lustfully Lasting
Laughing Longingly
La-La Luna
~*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-09-11 09:34 PM


~*~
Lovely Loony
Lyricists,Ellie~,Tracie~
Sudhir~ and Kit~ all going
straight to "L" over a Little
Lilting Luna Lullaby Looming
Lightly Lustfully Lasting
Laughing Longingly
La-La Luna
~*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2000-09-11 10:01 PM


luna's
light lifts
love lavishly
laughing loudly
learned liquid
lessons left
lucidly

jwesley
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12 posted 2000-09-11 10:26 PM


Well
I've been
left in the dust
here so will not even
try to compete with all
who are so much
better than I
at this
game

Enjoyed it much, my fiend!
jwesley




[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 09-11-2000).]

insect
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13 posted 2000-09-11 11:27 PM


Lovely La-La Luna
Laughing Lots
Lank you
Loops!


Balladeer
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14 posted 2000-09-12 12:48 PM


Lonely, lost Lochinvar laments losing luscious lady's love, leaving little limpid lakes littering linoleum like lather.
SEA
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15 posted 2000-09-12 01:24 AM


Marge~   This is too cute.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Kethry
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16 posted 2000-09-12 01:29 AM


Marge you do this so well, the shape the alliteration, the sense of it. I'm not even in the game.

lovely luna
laughingly listens
lest loonies,
leave light.

Lethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
17 posted 2000-09-12 06:39 AM



Butterflies_dont_cry
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18 posted 2000-09-13 02:37 PM



La La
Lovely Lady
Lace Looper Luna's
Light Lifted Lusciously
Lustrum Laden Layered
Latice Luster
La La


JulieAnn
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19 posted 2000-09-13 03:16 PM


Lovely
little lyric
liked  lots!!!
    


Julie :)



Marsha
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20 posted 2000-09-13 04:24 PM


Marge's Moon's
Mystical Moonlight
Makes Me Mesmerized
Moonlit my magic mood

Marge this is sooooooo great.      

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