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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-11 12:41 PM


It starts as surfing
pretty soon your lurking
and pretty soon you want more
more words to fill your head
more rhymes to read
and soon you achieve ten, twenty,
thirty and so
on and on and on
It's like music to my ears
as each word is revealed
just as a composer
writes his score
so must we diligently
let the poet write their words.
Then we are lost in such bliss
without a jest, we drink it all in.
Lullabye rhymes and shakespeare ballets
fill this room if for a day
Tarry we here again.

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2000-09-11 01:01 AM


SweetRoseBud~
How wonderful that you pay tribute to the
family of Passion's poets.
The warmth that is spread across the pages
is enough to keep us happily sitting at the
hearth of friends.

Beautiful thoughts, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-09-11 11:42 AM


Thank you so much Marge, I love this place, It's defintely found a place in my heart with all the wonderful people here how could I not.
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-09-11 01:18 PM



Rosebud...
           You have all the signs of being a Passion addict!!!  Don't worry though, you're in excellent company, and we'll keep feeding your habit, as long as you keep feeding ours!!!  
                Love ya and your work!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-11 02:38 PM


Take a deep sigh and accept your fate.  I have.LOL.....Yes I do believe you now qualify as having all of the symptoms my friend.
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
5 posted 2000-09-11 02:39 PM


We are culprits of our own fate,
Without Passion's we can't see straight...

Wonderful work here...
regards,
sudhir

Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-09-11 07:14 PM


Second home???  

I would say that for some of us. . . it's a FIRST home!!  lol    

Wonderful poem. . . yep, you're hooked!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-09-11 11:21 PM


Sunny1 I have signs you say! oh no am I so transparent! I do love poetry and your right have been hooked and loving it. It's even better than food at times. lol

Mark I see it's in your heart so you'll never part from here, nor will I.
O.k the first step; is the admission O.K I ADMIT i'm a poet alholic so serve me up some more please..

Sudhir
Culprits of our own fate
I'll think of that awhile pretty deep waters there. Or should I wade in them awhile?
In either case I'm here to stay.

Sven you make me grin, as you see that rhymes can't help it. I just can't o.k! alright i'm addicted to poetry.
I'm not turning back though this addiction is good for the heart, mind and body.
Alot better then exercise! lol

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