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Midnight's Gale (Co-written with Dusk Treader)
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Midnight's Gale (Co-written with Dusk Treader) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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It was a great honor to write this with you, my love.  *Abrahm *Krista The willows weep in veiled green And sway in silent prayer As the essence of eternity Clings softly on the air... Heaven's tears slide from boughs And hallow darkened land As two lost souls fade and flicker, Stumbling on shifting sand... Ashen skyline harshly swells With pain's relentless hunger Through silvered rain you call to me While dreams are torn asunder... Tormented by sulfur's scorn I plummet, broken winged Beginnings swathed in midnight pall Forging blades 'til I'm ringed... Onyx blood curves 'round your form Bathed in moistened moonlight I only hope your tempest quiets Once I'm held within your sight... Ebony shroud draws tighter Constricting frail mother's form I close my eyes and am captured Swept into leaden storm... Then 'pon your trembling note I grasp Giving strength to prevail... And woven in our melody We fly from midnight's gale. *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista and DuskTreader~ This is as lovely a duet as I've seen. What loving thoughts fly from your pens to magically grasp the ink of another in it's embrace. WOW ! Such a lovely, lovely write. And love the presentation ! I'm impressed and captured in the midst of your phrases. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Krista, Abrahm... This is most wonderful... regards, sudhir |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I thank you both for your kind words. *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Thank you Marge and Sudhir, for your kind words, I appreciate them greatly Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh you guys, this is beautiful! You two write really well together. It's wonderful to have someone to come to you in the dark night. Keep up the great work, great couple! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Writing from the heart and soul....from eachother's....it's evident that the two are combined as one. Beautiful work to you both...you each have your own personal style but combined you have one that is unique and can only be seen when you've joined them...a rare and special gift. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece~ |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LoveBug and Butterflies, thank you both so much for your kind comments. *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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