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Reach For Your Rainbow
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Reach For Your Rainbow |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“REACH FOR YOUR RAINBOW” Reach for your rainbow, and touch the sky, for magical visions, will come on by. A hue of colors that will encircle you, and one of those, will be a very soft blue. The color of your eyes, and the color of mine, becomes even softer, when they are combined. Yours are like emeralds, and mine soft sky blue, but only when my loving lips, are all over you. Won’t you hold me, during the dawn, as we watch the sky, fresh, like a newborn fawn? And then we can chase your rainbow over there, that speaks to us, about how much we care. Kiss the stars, and then kiss me, and I’ll show you things, just wait and see. Soft, soft lips, touching on mine, you’ll never see the likes of them, anytime! Wanting you, and you wanting me, let’s get together, and then we’ll see. All those soft touches, and heightened awareness, will drive each other, until we’re wildly breathless. Loving you, and you loving me, discovering the magic, which we might be. There are so many cherished affections, as we look up high, into the heavens. Did you reach for your rainbow, and touch the sky, when I saw you standing there, as I went by? Was it that pot of gold you sought, in the valley there, or was it I that you really wanted, when you became aware? So reach for your rainbow, and touch the sky, your dearest beloved will never deny. That you can perceive, the magic of the light, as we search for your rainbow, into the night. Bill Charles |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ Such lovely thoughts to kick off the Sunday afternoon of hazy skies with sunlight filtering through. Perhaps there will be a rainbow ! Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Afternoon Marge, Thanks for coming by, and for your considerate comments. Always nice to hear from you. A rainbow, perhaps there will be. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill Another one of your great masterpieces. Your poems make the reader feel like he/she is right there reaching for that rainbow. Nice reading. didi |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening 'didi', Nice to see you again, and thank you for your very kind comments about this writing. I have reached for this rainbow, and touched the sky. Bill |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"Kiss the stars and then kiss me" it doesn't get better than that. This is lovely, Bill. Kathleen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Irish Rose, Thank you for coming by, and for your considerate reply. I appreciate it. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have reached and NOW I am riding my rainbow.....wonderful read here Bill and I have to agree with you....only way to go my friend.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Bill... I love it!! I've been reaching for rainbows a lot lately, and kissing the stars sounds like a really nice thing to do! Wonderful writing, as always, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Mark, Nice to see you, and thanks for coming by. I'm happy for you that you have found a rainbow, it's nice when one can. And thank you for your kind reply, my friend. Hi Sunny, I'm very glad that you liked this little poem of mine. Oh yes my friend, kiss the stars, and then kiss me! A'hhh, thanks Sunny, you're always very gracious. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Bill-A nicely done rainbow of words! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Bill this is beautiful. I also particularly liked the "kiss the stars and then kiss me" line. I am looking for my rainbow, though it is hard to see at times. Your writing is very romantic, I always enjoy it. Catalinamoon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely words..enjoyed |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bill, this is a very inspirational and beautiful composition....well done |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Gemini, Thanks for dropping in, and for you kind reply. Good morning catalinamoon, Thank you for your gracious comments. Keep looking for your rainbow catalinamoon, for it is there, somewhere. And it will show, when least expected. Thanks for coming by. Morning Victoria, Thank you very much for stopping by for a read. I do appreciate it, and also for your kind reply. Morning Balladeer, Thank you for coming by and reading this little poem of mine. I have read much of your writings and thoroughly enjoy them. Appreciate the considerate comments. |
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Desi New Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 2 |
Another beautiful poem. Simply lovely. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Bill* Tender and graceful...I could see the rainbow from here!! Beautiful work~ |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~A Very lovely Poem Bill. Straight from the heart and very much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing this beauty!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Bill, This is supreme in composition, lovelier than lovely in thoughts and the expression - poetry... regards, sudhir |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...Into each pot of gold, a rainbow must fall... That was it, wasn't it?? Nice poem, Bill..   |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very nice read. I can see the rainbow and the passions you painted with your words. I think I'll go rainbow hunting. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Beautiful poem.. HUGS "If you always do what you've always done You'll always be where you are right now." Author Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Desi, Thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm glad that you had a chance to read this poem of mine. Hi Butterflies_dont_cry, So glad that you could come by to read this writing. Thank you very much for the kind reply. Hello Beth, Appreciate it that you were able to stop in. And I am glad that you liked the poem. Than you for your considerate comments. Hello Sudhir, I welcome you to my humble place on Passions my friend. And I thank you for your most gracious comments. May your days be full of sunshine. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Nan, Thanks for coming by. Glad you liked my little poem. Loved the pot of gold, and perhaps, that is what it's all about. Hi Alan, I see that you are a new member. Welcome to 'Passions'. You will love it here, as I do. Thanks for dropping in, and I do hope that you find that rainbow. Hi RainbowGirl, I'm glad that you came by. Thank you for your kind reply, and for the hugs. RainbowGirl hugged me, while I reached for the sky. I really didn't even know, that she was coming by. Thanks RainbowGirl! Bill |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Wonderful and sweet thoughts here...if it would only rain then we might have a rainbow of a different kind, but I like yours. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Martie, You are more than kind and I thank you. I do appreciate you coming by for a read. Thanks again. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful read and rainbow Bill...gotta say Nan's was pretty good too...not as eloquent as yours though... jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 09-13-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sigh....how romantic |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning jwesley, Thank you for your gracious reply to my rainbow. And yes, Nan's was really nice. Good morning WhtDove, Thank you for coming by, and for your romantic reply. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning jwesley, Thank you for your gracious reply to my rainbow. And yes, Nan's was really nice. Good morning WhtDove, Thank you for coming by, and for your romantic reply. |
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