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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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bright sunshine rises sheds warmth on my frozen heart I believe again ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
uhummmmm.....a beautiful realization, Sven  --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
and i believe your haiku has brought a bit of warmth to these forums... thank you for sharing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Hearts in passion thaw Recovering from the chill Held in hands of love *Wonderfully done, my friend. Thanks for the inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Very nice haiku my friend. I like it. How's this: bright new day dawning a spectacle to behold enchanting my soul Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
chanson, thank you my friend. . . Doreen, you are welcome. . . and thank you! Marge, thank you for your words. . . LW, very good. . . thank you as well, ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Following nightly chasing moon's beam so spritely sunshine smiles brightly |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Beautiful... so sweet and sincere. Thank you friend. ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, to believe again...truly an awakening to express with your beautiful poetry. This is stirring, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Yes believe again Faith in dreams to make come true Rainbows after storms Sven your lovely haiku made my heart smile. So wonderful to see you believing again my friend. All the best to you, Juls |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So glad you believe again, that faith is reborn. Great news!!  *Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, thank you. . . I'm glad that it does also. . . Artistic, thank you also my friend! Clarie, and I shall share it with all. . . thank you my friend. . . Juls, thank you very much. . . the storm is hard, but when the rainbow shines. . . the light leads. . . Isis, how could I not my friend? Thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful work, Sir Sven.... seems so easy when you do the artistic rounds.... oh yes, you are a POET... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Simply beautiful Sven, and so delightfully positive ... I love it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A wonderfully written haiku! Hope is a beautiful thing! I loved your haiku. Pain is only written in ice, my friend, and soon the sun will come and melt away the sorrow and fill it with hope Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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