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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
My life is not simple but not complex either it is a mixture of things that make me think but as I grow older trhe mixture begins to unmix but it is still not clear but not cloudy either there are things that i still don't understand the way that some girls don't know who's the right man but it is revealed to me that girls are also complex or just perplexed at the complication of my life and my feelings but who could have possibly thought of that. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Colors mixed with shades of grey. As we get older we get wiser and tend to understand a little bit more of this thing called life. It is only in trying that we understand. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
UNC STAR, Life itself is very complex and I think you have given us a nice peek into the dynamics of relationships between men and women. You just never know the other person is thinking or feeling. Nice writing.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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