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UNC STAR
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0 posted 2000-09-09 01:20 AM



It flows like the river
and knows no bounds
It extends across the heavens
And stretches across beyond
the ocean, but we cannot see it
Only feel it, not know it but show it
And this is love.

That was for all the ladies.

© Copyright 2000 Jamie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-09-09 09:09 AM


Welcome! It knows no bounds. Says it all!
Just the like the wind, can see it, but you can feel it. I like the way you've described this with nature. Well done!

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2 posted 2000-09-09 08:43 PM


UNCStar~
Love is all that - and more !
Thank you for sharing.
~*Marge*~



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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-09-09 10:46 PM


Very nice---
and I like the name--- UNC--Tarheel?

Sal Paradise's brother
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4 posted 2000-09-09 11:38 PM


cool, i go to school at UNC.


go Heels!

=)

Severn
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5 posted 2000-09-10 07:11 AM



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