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Lady Web
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0 posted 2000-09-08 10:04 PM


Serenading in appearance, captivating the eye
His lyrical notes induce temptations that mystify
Off key to some, yet in sync to me
He flows of a sweet melody
Instrumental is he in a choir of deux
Feeling the beats in rhythm only for two
The composing of a ballad seems quite mutual
Seizing the moment with precise timing is crucial
Pondering this medley what are my chances
To mingle in his love of sweet dances



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-08 10:27 PM


Very beautiful, Lady Web!  

Denise

Lady Web
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2 posted 2000-09-08 11:49 PM


Thanks Denise, you know that I enjoy hearing from you. I've been out of sorts for awhile but now I'm back
I'm trying to put a little more creative effort into my new works soon to come.

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