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Where It Belongs |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I wished upon a star tonight To see the love there in your eyes To pull you close and hold you tight And hear you whisper passion's cries To feel the warmth within your touch As I gently stroke your hair I've never wanted anything so much As to be lying with you there I've loved this memory for too long I need to feel your touch again It's just too lonely here when you're gone Please? Say you're making plans To feel our love combine to one Our warm slick bodies again unite Come and get this heart you've won How I long for you tonight To hear you say you love me for all time But I guess I'll just have to be strong I know someday that you'll be mine My heart knows ...where it belongs |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written Jeffrey  I enjoyed. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jeffery~~~This is beautiful!! I like it alot. Wow! What can I say I feel as if I am speechless (and that rarely ever happens). Im really glad I got to read this.  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Wonderful Jeffery!! I love the softness of it and the sincerity of every line. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, It is always good to know where you belong. This was very beautiful writing my friend. Be strong . . . Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Very nice sentiment, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Wow... whoever this one is about should deffinitely feel...... well... loved. =) You put yor heart on the line in this one. Hey... if guys did it for me, I'd swoon 4 u. =) --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is so very beautiful |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jeffrey this is fantastic. Way to go buddy Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Jeffrey...I REALLY liked this.....Great post!!!  Julie :) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jeffrey you are right the heart knows where it belongs and you belong here at passions. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jeffrey, this is a fabulous post... been quite a long time since your last one... and you came back resoundingly... regards, sudhir |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you all so very much for reading and replying. The woman this is for knows who she is I am sure of that And Dave...now that's a compliment...err...at least In think it is LOL |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Lots of thought went into this piece jeffrey,.. it's extremely.. well done... I love it! |
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