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Holding You
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“HOLDING YOU” Did you ever smell the newborn grass, on a lovely, damp spring day? When we cared about each other, in that very special way? Did you ever take a walk in the park, stealing kisses, when it was dark? Feeling loving lips together, both pairs making their mark? Did you ever crave a gentle kiss, from only him, on your tender lips? And a very soft loving touch, with his passionate fingertips? Did you ever lie in a meadow, and hold each other tight? Feeling the warmth of two bodies, from daybreak, and into the night? Did you ever lay with him, in his enticing, sensuous bed? Holding, touching, and loving, until you thought, you were a newlywed? Did you ever want to know, how he really feels about you? Or do you lie there next to him, and he never gives you a clue? So you smelled the newborn grass, and he said that you were the one. Smiles lit up your pretty face, knowing you were, that special someone. Bill Charles |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill "Did you ever crave a gentle kiss, from only him, on your tender lips? And a very soft loving touch, with his passionate fingertips? Did you ever lie in a meadow, and hold each other tight? Feeling the warmth of two bodies, from daybreak, and into the night?" These are beautiful words with so much meaning and sensuality. Finding that special someone and knowing that you are special too is a fabulous feeling. Great poem didi |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is beautiful...and such questions you ask...what woman doesnt want to know the answers to them? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wow... Bill this piece is oh so beautiful and captivating, I was enchanted with every word. Lovely piece Bill...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning 'didi', Thank you once again 'didi', for your most gracious comments. Yes, being special is so special. Good morning Paula, Thank you so much for coming by to visit. I do appreciate it, and also for your wonderful words. Good morning tracie66, I would like to thank you for stopping at my place for a read. And thank you for your most considerate comments. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, Do you ever write a bad poem? I don't think it is possible.. every poem I read from you I like more and more and this one is no exception  rp25 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ahhhh......words spoken from your tender heart light up my morning like the sun!! Beautiful writing, as you always do... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good afternoon rosepetals25, Well rosepetals, I try not to write one that's, well you know. But many go to the waste basket, and are started over! You are very sweet, and I do thank you for coming by, and for your kind comments. Afternoon Sunny, Why thank you, one of tender words. You are always so very kind. Thanks Sunny. |
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