Open Poetry #9 |
--- So Far Away --- |
The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
--- So Far Away --- Distance breaks so many hearts. They and their loves, so far apart. But fortunate are those who pine. There's never been a love called mine. Their love is gone, so far away. But I am lonely every day. Some men see things as they are and ask "WHY ?" I see things as they could be and ask "WHY NOT ?" |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so beautiful, and so true how we often feel so alone in a world filled with so many people yet distance seems to drag us apart, Open your heart and let it sing and this I know releases pain. Nice to read keep it up! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
dont worry, you will find love...it just falls in your lap when you arent looking...this is a lovely poem....be patient and keep your heart open and it will happen! "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Heart felt longing within your weave...it was felt in every lovely word~ |
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