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That STAR
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That STAR |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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If today the sky suddenly fell down And all of the heavens were scattered 'cross the ground I would still have no trouble finding the star I wish on ev'ry night The one that's so enchanting that it holds me in it's light Sending me warmth with knowing that you love me dear Even if it's cloudy it's beauty still shines clear It picks me up when I am down sings softly whispered words to me It tells me that now and forever this love was meant to be Gives me the motivation to face the world again To swim across love's ocean chancing heartache's burning sands Yet, when I feel the lowest it makes my spirits rise That star I see every night brightly shining .......in your eyes!!! **Dearest darling, Thinking of you again as always  You are the reason I was put on this earth.....to love and be loved by you.....my heart is in your hands.....until we meet again.... All my love, Jeffrey |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
That is truly beautiful "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Jeffrey~ Just how sweet is this ? Just right ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jeffrey: This reminded me of a wonderful love letter., it was lovely Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very sweet and flowing from the heart. Great write here and full of promise. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is such an exquisite poem... To share this with us readers is indeed kind of you it truly brings a simle to my face to read of the love between you two... Kind regards, Coco |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
I see what you meant about the similarities between the two poems... uncanny! A fine emotion, well told. May your star burn brightly forever, my friend. Only a few are so lucky. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Jeffery, this is beautiful, you are just a hopeless romantic aren't you?! It's so touching to see such devotion and love Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Geesh....all this romance, not sure I can take much more, wasn't even written for me and I'm melting Great read Jeffery and I'm so happy you've found someone who brings out these feelings and these lovely words from you |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Jeffrey this is really beautiful! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you all so very much for being there for me when I was lonely and for giving us your support.....love and hugs to you all |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jeffrey, such a beautiful poem this one.... truly wondeful... regards to you my friend, sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a treasure for her heart very loving poem Liz |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful and heartfelt sentiments for the fortunate lady on the receiving end of your love Jeffery! Very nicely penned indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
OK..OK.....NOW I will reply!!! LOL  This poem is simply perfect and only secondary to the wonderful and heartfelt words of your personal note. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Jeffrey. Speaking of melting hearts... mine is in a puddle on the floor.. (sigh) We had such a lovely picnic in the moonlight last night and.. to read these words, wow! Remember, stars only shine bright because someone is looking at them.... xoxoxoxo So glad you looked... and stayed.... and I love you darling. and boy do I feel shiny!! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Darling......you shine brighter than all of the stars in the sky combined.....I love you Until we meet again.... All my love, Jeffrey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Darling, Once I looked I was held there in your amazingly enchanting eyes. Then you touched me and I was yours totally and completely. I love you now and forever. Until we meet again..... All my love, Jeffrey |
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