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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2000-09-01 04:28 PM


If today the sky
suddenly fell down
And all of the heavens
were scattered 'cross the ground
I would still have no trouble
finding the star I wish on ev'ry night
The one that's so enchanting
that it holds me in it's light
Sending me warmth with knowing
that you love me dear
Even if it's cloudy
it's beauty still shines clear

It picks me up when I am down
sings softly whispered words to me
It tells me that now and forever
this love was meant to be
Gives me the motivation
to face the world again
To swim across love's ocean
chancing heartache's burning sands
Yet, when I feel the lowest
it makes my spirits rise
That star I see every night
brightly shining .......in your eyes!!!

**Dearest darling, Thinking of you again as always
You are the reason I was put on this earth.....to love and be loved by you.....my heart is in your hands.....until we meet again....

All my love,
Jeffrey



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Eilidh
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1 posted 2000-09-01 05:43 PM


That is truly beautiful  

"There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon

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2 posted 2000-09-01 07:45 PM


Oh, Jeffrey~
Just how sweet is this ?
Just right !
~*Marge*~


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Irish Rose
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3 posted 2000-09-01 08:24 PM


Jeffrey:
This reminded me of a wonderful love letter., it was lovely



Kathleen


Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-09-01 08:29 PM


Very sweet and flowing from the heart.  Great write here and full of promise.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-01-2000).]

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5 posted 2000-09-01 08:35 PM


This is such an exquisite poem...

To share this with us readers is indeed kind of you it truly brings a simle to my face to read of the love between you two...

Kind regards,
Coco

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6 posted 2000-09-01 09:41 PM


I see what you meant about the similarities between the two poems... uncanny!
A fine emotion, well told.
May your star burn brightly forever, my friend.  Only a few are so lucky.

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7 posted 2000-09-01 09:45 PM



Oh Jeffery, this is beautiful, you are just a hopeless romantic aren't you?!  It's so touching to see such devotion and love  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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8 posted 2000-09-01 09:50 PM


Geesh....all this romance, not sure I can take much more, wasn't even written for me and I'm melting   Great read Jeffery and I'm so happy you've found someone who brings out these feelings and these lovely words from you  
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9 posted 2000-09-01 10:09 PM


Jeffrey this is really beautiful!


Jeffrey Carter
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10 posted 2000-09-02 01:15 AM


Thank you all so very much for being there for me when I was lonely and for giving us your support.....love and hugs to you all
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11 posted 2000-09-02 08:41 AM


Jeffrey, such a beautiful poem this one....

truly wondeful...

regards to you my friend,
sudhir

Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 2000-09-02 09:56 AM


This is a treasure for her heart
very loving poem
Liz

Kit McCallum
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13 posted 2000-09-02 10:04 AM


Beautiful and heartfelt sentiments for the fortunate lady on the receiving end of your love Jeffery! Very nicely penned indeed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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14 posted 2000-09-02 11:34 AM


OK..OK.....NOW I will reply!!!  LOL  

This poem is simply perfect and only secondary to the wonderful and heartfelt words of your personal note.

Marina


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15 posted 2000-09-02 11:35 AM


ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Jeffrey.  Speaking of melting hearts... mine is in a puddle on the floor.. (sigh)

We had such a lovely picnic in the moonlight last night and.. to read these words, wow!

Remember, stars only shine bright because someone is looking at them.... xoxoxoxo

So glad you looked...
and stayed....

and I love you darling.

and boy do I feel shiny!!

Jeffrey Carter
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16 posted 2000-09-02 07:02 PM


Darling......you shine brighter than all of the stars in the sky combined.....I love you

Until we meet again....

All my love,
Jeffrey

Jeffrey Carter
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17 posted 2000-09-08 12:58 PM


Darling,

Once I looked I was held there in your amazingly enchanting eyes. Then you touched me and I was yours totally and completely. I love you now and forever.

Until we meet again.....

All my love,
Jeffrey

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