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In The Soft Dawning
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In The Soft Dawning |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In The Soft Dawning ~*Marge Tindal*~ Brush my cheek with one light kiss softly feathered in moments of bliss Touch my cheek with feathered sigh long after the moon has gone by Take me here and now to passionate heights In the soft dawning after the night ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge...Oh thank you for this beautiful poetry kiss this morning!!! It's just what the poet prince ordered!!!! **Angel Wing Hugs** |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Marge, Very beautiful indeed. And Very Romantic!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Sweet and passionate and oh so emotive - just the way I like it - thankyou marge it realy lightened up the day . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marge, no one knows how to wake up more than you do!!! Thank you for reminding us of the simple pleasure of dawn. Kathleen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, this was gentle butterfly kisses, awe inspiring. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hi Marge ... your simplicity shines bright here ... very nice. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Marge so tender and romantic. Love, Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Kisses upon eagles wing Caressing your cheeks so soft A song is left for you to sing As my feather sends your heart aloft Luna's light smiles upon you As you awake to midnights kiss Awaiting the kiss of morning dew Wanting to send you home in heavens bliss |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Simply beautiful, Marge! What a way to describe the feeling of love  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
wow I will believe in fairy tales again, I will. This was lovely and made my heart yearn.. *sigh* great job ~Heather |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
marge,form the title i KNEW this was going to be a beautiful poem and i was not disappointed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh! This is beautiful ... great, great work... regards, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Short, Sweet and beautiful Marge! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! I love it! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Hey ! I like dat der 'poet prince' idea !  Beth~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. AngelSwing~ Thank you. I was just emoting all over the morning ! Kathleen~ What can I say ? I'm an early-morning riser ... or just an all-nighter ! Tee-Hee ! MAMiller~ I appreciate your reply. Juliet~ Hi, gal ! Thanks so much. MarkB~ Oh, no ya' don't, cowboy ! You're not getting rid of me that easily ! Tee-Hee-Hee ! Melissa~ Yeah ! Thanks, girlfriend ! XAngel~ Got those fairy tales waking, gal ! Believe - believe - believe ! Kaile~ Thank you. I hope I never disappoint ya'. Sudhir~ Hugs, my sweet friend. DarkAngel~ Well, it was a morning quickie. *Wink* Denise~ Thank you, hon. I love that you love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Your kind of poetry is just what I need to read right now. Lovely, romatic and oh a little steamy Thanks hon Tracie xx Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, there is that "feathering" time, just after the night...those few suspended moments. You have brought them tenderly into my mind with this treasure. Lovely writing. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ *Sigh* . . . oh to behold the dawning of a new day. What a way to get one started!! Sounds perfect. You have a great talent for capturing those memorable moments in time my friend. Beautiful writing. Lone Wolf< !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Okay Marge, another tender piece you have penned. Just lovely. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Pleased to see you caught the steam. Thanks, hon. Claire~ Glad to have stirred a memory or two. Thanks for letting me know. LoneWolf~ To know you liked the 'capture' is more than enough for me. Thank you. Eloise~ I like knowing that you liked it. Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Waking to the sweetness of love... does it get any better than that? "Have a good day" is redundant afterward, eh? Thanks Marge for another thrill... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Marge Beautiful - just beautiful. You are the best! didi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ You read me so well. Thank you. DiDi~ Thank you for thinking so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
No touch can match a lover's touch No feather's brush I love so much To know I'm loved when loving's done To be still wanted when passion's run In the light of dawn's first glowing This love is wanted past all knowing (Just wanted you to know how inspiring you are )~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
*big, long sigh...* One of the greatest moments for romance, Marge. A beautiful painting of tenderness! Trev. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--you capture the perfect feeling in just a few words...wonderful!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Wilfred~ How sweet your feathered sighs - Thanking you in soft surprise. VanDana~ Like your smile, my friend. Trew~ Yeah ... I agree on the 'moment'. Thank you. Martie~ Sooooooo - are we calling this one a quickie ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Magic washes through my soul When I read poetry like this. Life stands still for one quick moment, One quick moment of absolute blisss. Marge, what a wonderful poem!! How wonderful it is to read your poetry again, what a treat for my heart and soul! I love you! Love and hugs Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil'Lizzie~ Look at you ... quipping with a sweet verse. Makes my heart happy ! Love you too, gal. Thank you for your sweetness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soft |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DixieDoodleGal~ I thank you SO MUCH for bump-diddy-bumping this one ... if for no other reason ... so I could tenderly read again the reply of Wilfred Yeats ... quote:What a pure treasure to be reminded of him~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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