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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-09-07 06:19 PM


As runes these thoughts that do presage
a story strewn about the page
brought forth from inner focal point
un-clear they still serve to annoit

What left en-crypted would decay
de-ciphered they could show the way
to realms of un-imagined things
on aspirations taken wing

Now freed from earthly bonds to soar
un-charted heights where so much more
awaits for those who would but seek
to break this silent code and speak

Aloud what fear has kept en-tombed
away from light lest it may bloom
for all in glorious display ...
the key may be one word away

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-07 08:35 PM


DrMoose~
I would think that this has to be
a deeply satisfying piece for you.

'Aloud what fear has kept en-tombed
away from light lest it may bloom
for all in glorious display ...
the key may be one word away'


It's so true.
Wonderfully said.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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2 posted 2000-09-07 09:53 PM


Very wise words, Dr.Moose! Wonderful poem!

Denise

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2000-09-09 09:31 AM


Marge,
I never really quite know where these things are going until they are finished .Perhaps that's why I enjoy writing . By working within the constraints of rhyme and meter,
the out-come is often different than what I had originally intended .This "discovering"
is really the most satisfying part for me .
Thank you as always for your kind words .
Doc
d.,
Thanks, I'm afraid I have been sorely tested to find time to write or reply of late .My apologies to everyone . It is always a pleasure to hear from you .
Doc

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