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Turret Dreams |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Turret Dreamsat end of evening's sigh, when streets sleep and the sky burrows down into the night a century of stars shine, illuminating sheer the wine that tempts these thirsty thighs bare legs languish soft against air that was meant for you to breathe silky skin parting the sheets, starting to believe these turret dreams |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
ohhhh, Baby! This is one erotic poem. Yikers! You don't know what yer doing! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow this was great...I really liked it..really erotic...  in a very sensual way I liked it alot... |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Claire, I found this both sensual and lovely...yet it is so much more than that...I hear a heart calling in the night. Well done as usual, my friend. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a century of stars shine, illuminating sheer the wine that tempts these thirsty thighs bare legs languish soft against air that was meant for you to breathe silky skin parting the sheets, ================= damn........ need i say more  (cant talk with a mouthful of poet envy anyway)*smile* when your good..your just so good .. and you are ALWAYS so good.. damn it ...LOL exceptional Claire...truly take care jm |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Can a male poet become enamoured of more than one female poet at a time? I guess he can! Whew! Like a drunk I'm going to have to 'swear off' on you -lest I fall off the wagon. (I know what I'll do - make sure I've had a healty dose of my object - to ward off side effects - then concentrate on reading your work as a means of improving my own sensual writing skills) (jes kidding - this was wonderful and beautiful and I really loved it very much. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
LJA, so...does this mean you like it??? JulieAnn, thank you very much for reading and for the "wow" Michael, your perception comes as no surprise to me...thank you for your sweet words today. Glad you enjoyed reading. Janet Marie, you're so funny! Thanks for reading, dear. Bill, you're a shameless flatterer, I am convinced of it. I don't know who the other female poet is, but she must be special to have you so smitten. You're welcome to read my work any time you feel like it, but it's not exactly "smitten" material, I'm sure. Take care ~ Claire < !signature--> Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire. . . wow. . . I can just picture the flickering candle in this one. . . so soft. . . okay. . . if I say anymore, I'm just going to give myself away. . . so, I'll stop now. . . Amazing. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, that you enjoyed this pleases me very much...thank you. You may give yourself away whenever you wish, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Meadowmuse, Phew! I really like this alot, a very sensual longing. Well done |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A remarkable poem, smooth and sensual.... regards to you O Claire, sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now you've went and done it...I'm all alone tonight..in fact most nights and you had to start talking about silky skin...you have my undivided attention now...James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully sensual Claire ... teases the mind, this does ... very well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ This is just WONDERFUL ! Your phrases fall in soft array of awakening sensuality. A pleasure to read, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Dark Angel, (smiling) thanks for the Phew! (still smiling) Sudhir, my most sincere thanks to you...I'm glad you liked this little poem. James, oh dear James, I am so sorry. I would never want to contribute to you feeling uncomfortable in any way... will it help if I promise never to write about my silky skin again? (((you))) (still, I do rather like the idea of having your undivided attention...) Kit, thank you so much. Free verse is not my forte' but every now and then I try. Thanks for reading, Kit. Miss Marge, your pleasure is my pleasure, my friend. Thank you! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
uhm wow ~Heather |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Claire ... you've managed to manipulate sensuality with the utmost skill and craftsmanship ... One of these days we'll be reading this same poem from you ... perhaps without the dream Thankyou for helping me feel my heartbeat |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully sensual, Claire! Very lovely! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Heather, thank you for the smile and the "wow"... (still smiling) Rex, "without the dream" would be a dream come true...thank you for sharing that beating heart of yours. Denise, thank you so much for reading. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very tantalizing, claire - knew better than to peek into this one - sigh... Lovely work, as always Michael |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Now this was Damn good!!....I like it alot!~ ~Cherie~ |
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shy lady Junior Member
since 2000-09-02
Posts 10 |
Wow! How sensual...very nice! Shy Lady |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Erotic, sensual, and ....welll....let's just say cowboy has removed his hat to wipe brows and forehead.....Great read Claire and penned as only you can. |
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