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Luna's Delight |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Luna's Delight Walks in the dark Talks in the night Hands held in light Of Luna's delight Hearts all aglow Breasts heaving high Lips quiver tight Heaven's little sigh Eyes dance to song Hands follow tune Lust taps in time Love is coming soon Fingers laced to peace Words spoken soft Arms set to entwine Souls sent aloft Ears ringing proud Hair flowing down Truth touches sky In starkissed gown Walks in the dark Talks in the night Hands held in light Of Luna's delight Mark Bohannan [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey Mark, this is so ethereal... so Luna-like... regards, sudhir. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mark, I agree with Sudhir...this reads like an evening of romance bathed in moonglow. So lovely... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lun-ovely |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walks in the dark Talks in the night Hands helds in light Of Luna's delight Hearts all aglow Breasts heaving high Lips quiver tight Heaven's little sigh ========================== when you hear Heaven sighing ... well,...YOU KNOW...  love this one Mark.... its so calming and serene ... quiet comfort ....like being held all night in a dream... later-Luna-gator love ya me |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ this is positively romantic! Loved it!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--How tender is your moon dappled, hand holding path...I love this poem! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I like the simplicity of this poem, Mark! Concisely written with a soft feel. One minor typo, I think... "Hands helds in light" s/b hands held in light? Corinne |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I feel like I just took a romantic midnight stroll with the perfect man!! Loved this one.....just beautiful as always... Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sudhir- Thank you my friend Claire- We all need baths like that once in awile do we not? Thank you. Karilea-Thank you much my friend JM-If it is a dream please do not wake my up!! LOL....Thanks sweet friend. SEA-I am glad you found it romantic. Thanks much to you Martie-Wanna join me hon'? SO happy am I that you LOVED it. Corinne-Thank you twice. I fixed the typo and now do I have to pay you to edit it for me or is the service free? LOL... Julie-You just did my friend you just did. Thank you.[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Oh, like is this too beautiful or what ? You know what that moon does to me ! Light cascade of Luna glow bathing rays of sheer delight In lap of luxury lay me down dance moonbeams on my heart this night Wrap my heart in tenderness in the afterglow of Luna phase Showing with the morning glowing As Sun gowns the meadow with her rays I swear I just love it when that happens ! Thank you, cowboy, for the inspiration. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I hate posting after Marge and her beautiful responses. This is a lovely poem with many beautiful phrases. Liked it much Liz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You said that this was simple.....I hardly think so...the beauty in it is profound and the peace and grace within the folds of it's beams are magnificent...I loved every line as it was penned in the moonlight of your heart. Exquisite writing my dear friend~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge----Just come walk with me and ssshhhhhhhhhh.....let the dance of Luna's grace whisper in our ears.  Liz-Thank you so much and worry not YOUR words have an eloquence of their own. Holly-Care to ride the moonbeams with me again? Rainbows at midnight await us at the other side. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, mystical moonbeams, marooned maudlin, muse and magnified the moment. Marvellous Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Very enjoyable reading Mark!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
After reading this.....I can't wait for it to get dark!! LOL A soft and gently poem Mark. I loved the flow. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
let lunacy befall on this night of dashing stars that take hold of the fullness of the moon and dance into new dimensions in awesome form they envelope the skies that sends us gazing with moonbeams in our eyes.. beautiful Mark absolutely undoubtly delicious. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Kethry-Love the way you mouth puts those words out. Thank you. Beth- Thanks hon'...glad you liked it. Marina-Thank you so much and I will always try to make the flow enjoyable for you. Rosebud1229-So glad to see you licking your lips. Thank you so much. X Angel-so much said by that and I thank you much. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark This poem is bathed in pure romance... lovely and lovable |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a lovely and romantic poem Mark. Enjoyed much. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I was blinded by the light the first time through and couldn't see to add this to my library.....ok ok so I really wanted to take another walk in the moonlight |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
BloomingRose-I am so happy that you could see the romance in it and I love the loveable...thank you much. Eloise-I thank you so much for your wonderful reply. Holly-I will walk with you in the moonlight for all eternity my friend. Thank you for sharing this one with me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Had to come back for a re-read...found it just as enchanting [even with edits] the second time around... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ What a delight to read this "Luna Delight" well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Karilea-You honor me with your friendship and dedication. Thank you my friend. Tracie-Thank you so much for your read and I am glad you liked it. |
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