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What Should Be
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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What Should Be The thread of love visible only by the bond it ties should not be broken, if love is true. (Love is true) The kiss that you give, your warm blooded lips on mine, that love should not be shared with another. (Love not shared with another) The winter winds whistle around me ~ but you are warm to the naked flesh, the summer rays streaking towards me now bronze colored flesh this flesh is yours in love (Love for me what is mine) Should you break the slender silver thread; should you share your love with another, should you abuse my love and break me, then forget me…. For then I will know I loved wrong and shall cease from the mistake I made. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 6 September 2000 Circa April 1970 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Fellow K...this just moves me I can really feel this one Well done hon  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is Supreme.... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thoughts as timeless as to remain on the pages of the heart forever. The ink of this penning is yet damp with memories. Wonderful, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Message heard loud and clear in this one my friend. You have penned another beauty and in your style of grace it shines bright and deep. You knew it would though so no surprise to you. Loved it much. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
oh Sunshine, Wonderful....to be able to write my very feelings and emotions like you....would be a treasure-you have. Love, Marcy |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I loved this.....good message...never settle....that is my motto....hurt me once...shame on U....hurt me twice...shame on me!!! Loved it... < !signature-->Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Beautiful Karilea, I could almost hear the softest music playing in the background as this is narrated....just wonderful. Bonnie |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Wow Sunshine: I've got goosepimples.. HUSG "He who lets his spirit be broken by adversity certainly has no success. But if adversity only bends a man, it creates in him a power to react that |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi SUNSHINE, I'm keeping my comments short... Incredible expression Capturing the heart of this reader Coco |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunshine-I am moved, absolutely beautiful words. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Really moved by this Sunshine, utterly awesome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, "circa 1970"? Wow. . . This was absolutely amazing. . . even then, the depth of your emotions was evident. . . just beautiful. . . Superb my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Severn, so glad to see you here... Sudhir..."supreme"...sounds like Pizza! Let's eat... Marge, yes, "timeless"...I felt THAT old this week... Mark, appreciate your comments so much... Marcy, you do just that... JulieAnn...exactly! Bonnie, thank you for sharing that with me...feedback of that nature is what it's all about... Cindy, you should see the smile on my face! Coco...stay captivated...thanks! Gemini, thank you for sharing... Mark - a second peek? Thank you Marsha... Sven...I keep telling you, I'm ancient! Thank you everyone! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karilea, "ancient"? "Timeless" would be a better word my friend. . . the words of this poem. . . timeless. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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