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SEA
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0 posted 2000-09-07 01:54 AM



The song came on the radio
and swept me away,
across time, to memories
that feel like only yesterday..........


I was lost to the feelings
I couldn't help but feel
remembering....aching.......
wanting...........


It was you,
it was me,
now...........
it's a memory

I miss you so much.....................

-SEA-

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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1 posted 2000-09-07 01:59 AM


Oh my god, you just put my feelings in black and white!  That is exactly what I am feeling right now.  Thank you.   Wonderful poem

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One~ Nice to see you comin 'round again!   This one got me out of bed and made me put it on here........so glad you liked it!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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3 posted 2000-09-07 02:11 AM


Sea~
Such loving, tender longings  
Lovely poem
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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4 posted 2000-09-07 03:02 AM


Tracie~ you are always so cheerful and sweet, thank you   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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5 posted 2000-09-07 03:45 AM


I like it so much... it's sad and I can relate. Take Care!  
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6 posted 2000-09-07 04:01 AM


SEA~~~This is beautiful...I know how it feels to miss someone..I have been there....this was so deep and still short and to the point...I liked it a bunch!! Great post!!  

Julie :)



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7 posted 2000-09-07 09:41 AM


LM~ thank you  

Julie Ann~thank you very much!  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-09-07 09:55 AM


As short and powerful as the pain is long and deep.  You have said it all in this one and I think we all have been there at least once.  Beautiful write SEA
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9 posted 2000-09-07 10:06 AM


Short....and very well said...

K

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10 posted 2000-09-07 10:14 AM


Amazing how music can trigger memories, isn't it?

Corinne

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11 posted 2000-09-07 10:37 AM


Mark~ yes, at least once   thank you

Severn~ thanks  

Corinne~ Yes, it amazes me every time  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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