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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-09-06 08:36 PM


In Silence of the Night


Lying back, sounds of crickets
breaking my silent thoughts,
as trying to dream once more,
has become almost an artform.

Lighting candles, vanilla,
my favorite, to enhance my senses,
enticing my mind to remember
to feel, to want and desire.

What once was is gone,
taking from me the strength
to pursue life's forces and
leaving me weak from need.

If only, two words of no meaning,
yet they keep escaping my lips in sighs,
wanting to exile them to that corner
in my mind and heart where the"forever lost" resides.

So hard it is to give up routine
even one's that have made you suffer.
So numb to the pain, that you almost
can't exist without the hurting.

Here I lie, tonight in the warmth,
soaking in thoughts of the now,
inhaling the smells of tomorrow,
releasing a little at a time, yesterday's dreams.

And in the silence of the night
you shall come to me,
in the steamy mysts that reign
merely a dream, but my future's hold.

Maureen
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© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-06 09:34 PM


Very beautifully done, Maureen. I could feel every word of this!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-09-06 10:47 PM


I think I barely  breathed as I wrote this..the pain  would rise and fall in my thoughts
~~soft thanks Denise
Maureen

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3 posted 2000-09-06 10:48 PM


I think I barely  breathed as I wrote this..the pain  would rise and fall in my thoughts
~~soft thanks Denise
Maureen

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4 posted 2000-09-06 10:50 PM


Sorry Denise..who knows what or why that happened   I just thanked you twice but  that's ok  you deserved it and while here explaining what I don't know happened I will thank you a third time..at least it's causing me to smile
~~soft smiles
M

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