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Death----Steves challenge
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Death----Steves challenge |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Im alone and afraid and its silent The darkness falls about me like a panther Stealthy and silent No moon, no stars, no light, and no sound Why? Why? Why? No one answers For its silent |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula... It's too quiet in here....this is really a great poetic description of death!! It is almost peaceful in it's quietness..... Great job!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A most chilling piece of work Paula! Well done. *Peace. |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Paula ~ Darkly well done...  SB“The union of the mathematician with the poet, fervor with measure, passion with correctness, this surely is the ideal” |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
oh i can just imagine it, hope death isn't like that What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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