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Jezabel
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Jezabel |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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Jezabel Jezabel, you stole his heart so on weekends he's all yours. He sees you as a perfect beauty without your faults and flaws. He takes you out when he can to places I'd like to see. Each weekend we sit at home, just the kids and me. I'd like to play his game, going out and having fun, but I have a problem there. Who'd look after the little one? Its not that I'm jealous of you, the other love of his life. Its just that you're only a boat and I am his faithful wife. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Just toooooooo adorable ! Gone Fishin' ! Precious ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
LOL i agree with Marge..this IS too adorable! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh....this is really priceless!!!!! I wonder how many wives feel this way? Wonderful writing, Dee!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Glad you liked it, Marge. Wish I was fishin' |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Cute yes but a little too sad in it's truth. Excellent read and loved the flow.  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Dawn and Sunny1, glad you liked it. It was written for a friend of mine. I think his wife really does feel this way. Dee |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mark, it was meant to be a little sad but I also wanted it to be a reminder for him. Thanks for your comments. Dee |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, I'm glad it isn't you but I'm sorry for friend. I hope he sinks!! Kathleen |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks for stopping by and reading this, Kathleen. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is very very sad...at least a woman you can "fight".....but those little gills...OOOHHH there's just no match for that! Great writing Dee, I hope your friend's husband wakes up and sees what he's missing!!! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies, thanks for your comments. Dee |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Dee, I'm sorry, but I'm still getting my sailboat and when you come to visit I'll take you out and let you be the captain. Hey, then Ashley can be the sad one....Great writing, dear. Love, Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dee loved your last line.... I too hope his boat sinks  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Its ok Michael, I still love boats. This was written for Karl's wife. Thanks for reading my poem. Love, Dee |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
tracie, thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you liked it. Dee |
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