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Open Poetry #9

Too Many Years

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2000-09-06 10:29 AM

It isn’t that she’s leaving me
It isn’t that she can
it’s just that when she dreams at night
its of another man

and while I can not blame her
I blame her all the same
for calling out, no, shouting out
that shameless strangers name.

It isn’t that I really care
it isn’t like I can,
it’s just that when she dreams at night,
it’s of another man!

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

1 posted 2000-09-06 11:35 AM

Debbie~
You did such a wonderful job of showing the pain from this relationship. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-09-07 04:58 AM

Debbie,
This is great , I look forward to more.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-09-07 08:42 AM

Hey Debbie

Nice work here...very frank, like that!

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."

From Jack Maggs

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