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kaile
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0 posted 2000-09-05 08:30 PM


Undaunted,
the spider spins its web
Again

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-05 09:29 PM


Kaile~
Great poetic pause -

Congratulations, my friend.
Now, of course, we await the next.

I don't like spiders ...
but I love the beauty of the webs they weave ... again.
~*Marge*~


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Dennis L. White
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2 posted 2000-09-06 06:47 AM


Kaile,
  Congratulations on your 1000th post! WOW!
Persistence does pay off!  Way to Go! Write on!
Dennis :^)

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 09-06-2000).]

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2000-09-06 06:49 AM


You have woven well, Kaile...

CONGRATS

regards,
sudhir

Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-09-07 06:11 PM




Spinning web of life
silken wonders it will bring
grasping eyes aghast

Beautiful and congrats on reaching this pennacle.  

kaile
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5 posted 2000-09-08 01:08 PM


thank you everyone for replying

thanx Mark for your poetic response..i must say that your haikus are coming along fine

my latest indulgence is minimalist(did i spell that right?hmmm) poetry and hopefully i have done this one right at least

Martie
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6 posted 2000-09-08 03:06 PM


Wonderful and congratulations!
Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-09-08 03:45 PM


This is simply splendid...congrats
Sven
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8 posted 2000-09-09 07:56 PM


Excellent my friend!!

Sometimes, you just have to keep trying. . .

Congratulations!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


kaile
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9 posted 2000-09-14 12:19 PM


thank you all for your lovely replies...i am glad i just keep on trying at this wonderful place
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10 posted 2001-12-05 06:26 PM


I like the ending. Just ONE word "Again" is enough to show the persistence that is in your title. Wonderful!  

_,,,^.^,,,_
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wow! wonderful!
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