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Rambling Once Again
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Rambling Once Again |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Rambling Once Again she says to me (my neighbor) while I weeded today how "bizarre this really is" to be pained, so much in this way why not seek some help for strength build up your confidence, again it's always easy for others to say what they would have done, if them but I am torn, and scared even more I'm to be shelved, after all these years that's what it feels like... I am dented, outdated it's younger, he wants now to share too old to be sated I'm a heart filled with dreams never completed in all and a waste of a mind memory soaked hurtful his words, to recall why can't we leave just as we had begun as good friends, who cared for each much no hurting, no fighting soft gentle goodbyes leaving wishes of morrows to touch and a peaceful new start for each to enjoy a new beginning, apart held within each, a corner, remembered the best of those years, in each heart. M 9*2k |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is good writing... this part: but I am torn, and scared even more I'm to be shelved, after all these years is so very painful.  "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Maureen honey....in time it is he that will be asking YOU for all that you seek and it is YOU that will so much further than he. Your pain is now and will be long gone by the time he is able to even begin to face his. You are a tender soul and you have much to offer.....much more than one so young to as not even know what life is. Smile girl and give the world what for. Lovely write as usual my friend.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Maureen, You write of pain and anguish, but time will pass, as I have said. Peace and serenity be with you, and there will be a time when you will overcome. //softer smiles for you// Bill |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It sounds as if you are overcoming. The only shelf that should contain you are for your words--in a beautifully bound book in the poetry section of the library. best to you Kathleen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Severn yes it is all very painful, for some reason no one believes two persons can end their love for one another civily and all the outside influences come into play rather than to allow that to happen in our case...it is destroying years and years of caring for one another... thank you ~~soft thought Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Oh Mark ..you really don't know me..maybe I am that bad and not deserving of him anymore...sometimes I have to wonder ...what have I done to have this thrown upon me in this way.... thank you for your responses ~~softly Maureen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, If you are bad you hide it so well. Everything I see in you is beautiful and gentle and very, very good. Hang in there girl. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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