»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
The Avenue
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
The Avenue |
|
|
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I saw you in the avenue of pain screaming at the moon to give you a name one that would hold you, granting some peace to all those tired nights you cried in your sleep. My convergence came to me in pain of wonders that I saw and wanted to remain your life gave pleasures insure that I had died in nights amazement as we loved through out the night. I saw you staring at the avenues of pain to which you screamed the distance of my name in smallest wonders of your souls content and fearful strides that could'nt be kept. Your hearts pure vision which tore inside your mind gave the fire warmth as you tried to hide from what we felt inside and deeper ever still we ran away from what we wanted all along. |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Michael G.... This is really a beautifully written poem, and it left pictures in my mind.... I love the way you write, my friend! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice penning you have done. The imagery and the flow are both exceptional. I really liked this one alot.  |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I saw you in the avenue of pain screaming at the moon to give you a name one that would hold you, granting some peace to all those tired nights you cried in your sleep. My convergence came to me in pain of wonders that I saw and wanted to remain your life gave pleasures insure that I had died in nights amazement as we loved through out the night ======================= Your hearts pure vision which tore inside your mind gave the fire warmth as you tried to hide from what we felt inside and deeper ever still we ran away from what we wanted all along. ========================= *sitting here shaking my head* ... this poem is a perfect example of why I fell for your poetry ... from the first read... your gift of depth of expression and intensity of emotion awes me, intrigues me, and enchants me. so cool...are you  this is one of my favs now... I felt every line.. thank you for that... later my poet of heart-gator jm |
||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I run out of things to say about your poetry. You are an absolutely incredible writer, and if I had half your talent I would be thrilled. Love ya, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Michael* This is poetry at it's finest..you play this poem with the skill and grace of a master...Awesome work!! |
||
|
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Oh, how do I thank you all, just say thanks and hope that is enough..... |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh my...why don't you just blow me away like a feather next time? superb... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
