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120 Degrees W. Longitude, 37.50 Degrees N. Latitude
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120 Degrees W. Longitude, 37.50 Degrees N. Latitude |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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120 West Longitude, 37.50 North Latitude Synchronizing longitude and latitude By degrees, from zero in Greenwich In the obliquity of the ecliptic Cartographers depicted imprecisely A geodesy of contours and land masses, New hemispheres at last unveiled Splattered with geographical folklore – Neptune supporting the sphere, Mythical islands circling the North Pole Lakes moving from one place to another. Measuring distances presently, With dead-eyed accuracy Mapping the topography Most expediently All points leading home. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh! Magnificent.... All ways lead to home ... excellent.. regards to you Corinne, Sudhir |
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Jenova Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16germany |
Oh my gosh, this is amazing... I wish I could think of words like this when I'm writing... hope to read more of you soon! Jenova |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I have to second the two comments that go before me.....this is absolutely wonderful Corinne  What lies behind us and lies before us are small matters compaired to what lies within us. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Sudhir, Jenova and Hoot_Owl for your kind words. Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, you rock...... But, you couldn't have just wrote down your address the normal way.... oh, and was that left or right at the 120th longitude..  Parker |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm with Parker, Corinne...you rock! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Park - you know it's more fun this way, makes it a bit more like a puzzle. And it's left. Thank you, Martie! Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so whats it like to be so cool this is so cool C, and shows off your unique and creative poetic style as well as your diverse vocabulary.. which means i gotta go get my dictionary out  LOLexcellent read later-compass-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ And it's shorter than the zipcodes of today ! Know what ? You just WOWed ME !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Get a Garmin 12 GPS unit and you'll find your way home in no time! I loved your use of words here.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Corinne! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Janet Marie, Marge, PoetdeVine and Denise! Had fun with this one, wrote it so that a certain someone could track me down! Corinne |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Whew! Talk about playing hard to get! Couldn't you just, like, give him your address? The writing and word selection is excellent, Corinne....... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahh, yes, Balladeer, but where would be the fun in that??? Don't you like to be teased, just a bit? Corinne |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW Corinne an excellent piece. very cool. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
WOW~ing here, too, Corinne...this is impressive! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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