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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2000-09-04 12:24 PM

Soft caress
of longing finger,
Feathered touch
of passion's linger.
Drawing nigh,
sweet angel's grace,
On weathered skin,
doth beauty trace.
With gentle hand,
she draws me near,
Her healing balm,
strokes down my fear,
On heaven's winds,
Eros doth bring her,
Soft caress
of longing finger.

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Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2000-09-04 12:39 PM

Simply lovely, Mike

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-09-04 01:22 PM

I love romantic verse. This is very, very lovely.

Kathleen

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2000-09-04 02:01 PM

Mike--This is so beautifully done!

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

4 posted 2000-09-04 02:47 PM

This is beautiful writing. The words flow so smoothly, and I am left with a warm feeling and beautiful image.
Great work.
Marie~

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2000-09-04 03:12 PM

  Mike....
         You write with an angel's touch!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-09-04 04:41 PM

Mike~
Such an ethereal quality about this piece.
You've summoned thoughts from an angelic muse.
Beautiful.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

7 posted 2000-09-04 08:01 PM

Exquisite! Well done, Mike.

Elizabeth

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

8 posted 2000-09-04 09:52 PM

Beautiful words, beautifully arranged. You surely write from experience, my friend, for this is exquisitely real.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

9 posted 2000-09-05 12:29 PM

Nan... thank you so much for the lovely.
Irish Rose... thank you for the gracious reply. I have a fondness for romantic verse also.
Martie... thank you my friend... I am glad you liked.
Marie... what a wonderful reply. Thank you.
Sunny...how nice... don't think I quite qualify as an angel...*smile*
Marge...my muse seems to float across the landscape, but ultimately returns to the heavens... I truly appreciate the gracious comment.
Elizabeth... thank you kindly for the exquisite.
Claire...and sometimes the bridge between reality and fantasy is narrow also... but true beauty comes from reminisce.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2000-09-05 12:33 PM

Yep, here I am again...ever watching you...LOL...and 'tis a beauty...I thank you. And...
excuse me sir, but I do have a question...regarding the particular form...would mind terribly dropping me an "e" if/when you are not too busy? If not...I'll understand. I too, have gone underground....LOL

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