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Escape |
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Jenova Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16germany |
Sometimes I don't understand myself The simple act of letting go What I never had Turns out to be an unsolvable task And it hurts Piercing my heart Like a rain of blank sharp needles Hard to run from I'd be best hiding in rage Escape myself into fury Trying so desperately to hate you Just to forget how much you mean to me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Time will mend all wounds, Jenova and the hatred will become less evident... Have patience.... All in all a well written poem... Well done! regards, sudhir |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Pain makes great poetry, I live there myself. I love your poem. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
it is often too easy to lose yourself in hate...and pain does help enrichen our souls....but never give up on finding a safer, warmer, more positive place to dwell! this is a very good poem indeed! [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-02-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Jenova, Letting go, as I know, is a very hard thing to do. Choices can be made, but letting go, ahh, very difficult thing to do. Very nice thoughts in your work. |
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