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Surrender
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Surrender |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Surrender Drug me, release me for a while Lure me with your radiant smile, Your presence, voice and words, Appearance, glance and flirts... Just do it, please don't make me beg, Just for a moment let me hang... Intoxicate me with your charms, Confidence and manners are your arms There's no defense, I can't resist. I crave this war, don't need no peace Seduce me, touch me, make me burn Drunk with love, with desire worn. Surround me with the sweet aroma Of your existence filled with drama Take me in your arms and hold me, Play me, thrill me and adore me... Stop this endless expectation Do it, now, I'm out of patience! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
LM, this piece speaks of a lovely intoxication. Oh to feel that headiness, that unquenchable allure that arises when near (or even far from) the object of one's desires. You've really got something here, and I enjoyed it very much. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hehe  Thanks, Claire. I'm glad you liked it! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love the uniqueness of this. Having the chance to read and respond is wonderful, how I am dying to post something, but they just aren't finished yet.! Keep writing. Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
My friend, I am right there with you on this one. I did several poems of frustration in this vein also. we think so much alike. I have to talk to you.. Sandra |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Cut to the chase - get on with it - yes! (I'd need no such urging - what's wrong with tis lover? ) |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Irish Rose: thanks for the reply! I hope to read your stuff soon Catalina: thanks so much for relating and liking this one Wilfread: In a word? Married... Thanks for your comment! Take Care! |
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