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My Love's Eternal (Double Acrostic)
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My Love's Eternal (Double Acrostic) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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(turned out to be much tougher than I thought it would be) Many times I think of you as through life I gO Yesterday, today and tomorrow it's yoU Lost in this world, you ever and eveR O'er this land, your beauty eternaL Voicing my love and you know it is sO Ever you're giving, I'm no more a spiV Soft is your voice, my spirit runs freE Everywhere that I go, you are part of mE Together we'll weather, midnight or nooN Ephemeral it may be, but our love not doomeD Returning each day, pure white not ecrU Nothing can stop us we'll top disasteR A passion, a love whose first word is givE Laying beside you, no thought can surpasS [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ You certainly get an A+ from this corner ! That is remarkably well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wilfred you make it look so easy. How you do that? "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is beautifully done.... great work, O sir... regards, sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Now this is very clever...and pretty  --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Bill, I must concur with all before me...you've done a very nice job with this ~ ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
What a great job!!! what a great idea! Enjoyed it so much! Take care! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This presents a new challenge. I had never heard of a double acrostic, and I don't know how you did it. Wonderful! Liz |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful..and so darn hard to do!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--I know this must have been hard, I did a single arostic once and it was hard...you have done it so well...and it's a beautiful poem. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! Beautiful! I commend you for taking on such a difficult task. Not only did you succeed, but I am in awe at the amazing outcome, you crafted a masterpiece. You should be very proud of this double acrostic! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Amazing talent shown here Wilfred! Beautifully crafted, and holds such lovely sentiments beyond the complexities of this form. Very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
I heartily concur with all previous replies as I bow respectfully!! Excellent!! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Forgive me all for not replying individually - Simply let me say thank you all from the bottom of my heart - (maybe I'll try an acrostic sonnet now ~LOL) |
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