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The Best of What You Are
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The Best of What You Are |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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You are soft rain That comes in spring That brings me life That makes my heart sing You are flowers Blossoms in my seeing Fragrance and color giving To my total being You are food on my plate Fuel to keep me going Lending taste to my palate Day by day growing You are breezes, zephyrs Setting fire to my blood My summer sunshine Heating me like a flood You are thermals, updrafts Where my glider wings Do carry me aloft So I can soar and sing Your arms, like ivy vines Snaring me, wrapping me Envelope me in your warmth Loving me - securely Your lips, like finest vintage Are the sweetness felt On my tongue, in my soul So I feel I will melt Your eyes, the depth of love Wherein I dive swimming Pools of incandescent beauty Wherein I bathe drowning I feel you palpably like my Flannel shirt, pants of khaki Softly, I wear you like a Badge of honor, a humble lackey I say all this to let you know I feel I am because of you The luckiest man ever The world can view |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Every time I read something you write I just get all warm inside |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like a man in love. Beautiful sentiments and she is one lucky lady to have someone appreciate her as you do. Wonderful write and so glad you share your heart so well. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wilfred, Wow, love flowing every were through this beauty, wonderfully done, thanks for the lovely read. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi Wilfred, this one is a gem... The sigh of delight to read the verses you write... This is a splendid read  Coco |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I always enjoy your poems, Wilfred. This one is no exception. Dee |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Such charm ~ 'You are flowers Blossoms in my seeing Fragrance and color giving To my total being' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"you are breezes,zephyrs setting fire to my blood My summer sunshine Heating me like a flood" this is a very lovely poem much enjoyed ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh... It's so sweet... Loved it! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wilfred, What a lovely poem..~sighs~ The lucky lady who is on the recieving end of your love should be so grateful for such a romantic poem and loving thoughts rp25 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wilfred Yes, I would also say she is pretty lucky. A very beautiful poem and tribute to the one you love' Liz |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Very enjoyable... Truthfull and tender~ ~Cherie~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wilfred You are a romantic at heart. Every womans dream. Lucky lady whoever she is. Beautifully written as always. Deb |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--What tender words of love you write. You love poetry is simply beautiful! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
To say I am overwhelmed is a total understatement - before I could respond to one - I had 13 - so to all of you Paula, Mark, Cerinity, Cocobaci, Dee, Marge, Dawn, LM, RP25, Liz, Cherie, Deb & Martie THANK YOU SO MUCH [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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