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Kissing You Softly
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Kissing You Softly |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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 Kissing you softly Taking your measure Kissing you softly Savor the treasure Kissing you softly Wanting your moans Kissing you softly Feelings deep in my bones Drinking your sweetness, Lapping you up Linking your sweetness Warm milk in a cup Drinking your sweetness As a kitten does milk Drinking you in my mind too Your skin - soft as silk Suckle you like a newborn Caresses you savor Each teat a new joy Suckle for flavor Pressing you to me Incarnate I feel you You pressing to me Liquid with dew Tender words spoken Ears gently greeting Tender looks woken Eyes gently meeting Passion's dance started Tense bodies begun Passion's dance started Two bodies as one Body heat rising Tensing, relaxing Body heat rising All muscles taxing Suffused with your being Drowned in our loving Suffusion of love cream Balm we are sharing Kissing you softly Hearing your moans Kissing you softly Feelings deep in my bones. ~Upon the seagulls wings lies the ocean breeze, as silver moonlight floats along the tides endless shore, I stand beneath the stars to find peace *~LC~* [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew! Wow! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Shouldn't this be in the adult forum? Aren't we adults? - YES! What a poem! Am I allowed to read it again? and again? and again? Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
DAMN... is it  in here or what? Someone open a window to let the steam out. Excellent write my friend..now where is my sweetie when I need her.  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh my goodness. Sure cheered me up, wonderful .......soft....lips..ummm Kathleen |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wilfred, Well..what an end to my work day! Very sensual poem.. I loved it! hehe. Hmmmm.. it does make wish even more that my boyfriend could have made it up to visit though..  rp25 |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Whew this one is not just hot its boiling  "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea, Liz, Mark, Kathleen, RP25, Maria I thought long and hard about where to post this - I know too many - that do not read in Adult- and I'd rather write to them. For those single forum people in adult - seem to be more explicit- and I hope - I kept this within the bounds of acceptably sensual- Whatever- They are my feelings - thank you for responding |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very skillfully and ardently done, good sir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
if we're ever to exchange replies on a routine basis - you're going to have to drop the 'sir' - Thank you |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow Wilfred ... what a tantalizing and sensual read before I turn in for the evening! Beautifully flowing and rhythmic ... very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--You certainly do know how to dance the passion dance...and write about it. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Kit, Martie I may have been carried away - but I write with my heart as well as my brain. Thank you very much |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Wow! Close your eyes and lose yourself in that one! Excellent poem, Wilfred. Trev. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I like that thought Trev - I think I wrote one: "Close your Eyes" thank you |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh My...This Title caught my eye... Why because when my Bf and I sign our letters we always say*kissing you softly* This was breath taking. I am sending it along to him..Thank-you for sharing. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bill, you skillfully kept the ardently clean...but it was a close shave... and the aftermath of the scent is wonderful... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHHHHHH Bill....I felt this clear to my....well my toes hehehe...this is soooo sensuous so erotic...you know what you did... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
kitkat- I'm pleased with your use of my work - Thank you Karilea- I will try to always stay within bounds- sorry if I singed the edges a bit with this one Paula- I'm glad you enjoyed ~thank you  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew...I think someone turned up the heat in here *Looks at the thermostat* Nope, must just be me, but it certainly seemed to get hot real fast Bill....what can I say, this is an extreamly erotic read...nicely done |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Ruth- No cold showers provided you must supply your own - I'm glad you 'enjoyed' |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
This is definately NOT one to read when you are alone........DANG!!!!!! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Debbie - I only get to England about once every 10 years - and last trip was '94 - not much I can do but thanks for reading |
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