Open Poetry #9 |
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Orange Crush And What's The Rush |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396![]() |
Orange Crush And What's The Rush Circled 'round and up and through streams of laughter slide, down hilltops cleansed and trickled by to overflowing tides. Salted streets and pickled air where sounds of smiles fly, where contact breathes and eyes are wide to buttons never tied. Orange Crush and what's the rush when time is on our side? We're circling 'round and up and through with happy in our hands. We're tasting life with options clear and sifting through the sands. So, it's orange crush and hey, what's the rush, when time right now is good? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SpitFire, I'm sure Nan will like this one and so do I. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ ![]() ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: ALL of it... excellent writing!!! you are a very talented poet..! ![]() |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spitfire, the song "orange crush" by R.E.M just popped into my head and that was an anti war song, ok ranting, loved the poem, suits this sunny day perfectly. No rush at all. Sit down and bargain "Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~ST, thanks for coming by and reading me. ~Marge, thank you mam. ~Doreen, thank you, thank you for your reply. ~Brian, Yeah, I too thought of the REM song after I wrote it. *S* Thanks for reading man. *Peace. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
No rush at all on this blistering day. Loved every line and so aptly named as well. |
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