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Push This |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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For Blake H......PUSH THIS BABY.... (Softly Spoken) i was late you were there just like i knew you would be i know it's a job i have one too and please don't call me baby blue (Rock -N- Roll music to be inserted..) (Break) (Lyrics no chorus) because.... i don't want anything from you i'm not asking for your heart and i don't need to be put on a pedestal and i haven't seen anything special around those girls don't know how to love you baby like you seem to think they do please tell me that you didn't go there..... and i wasn't 'bout to waste my time my eyes saw through i wasn't gonna wait for you i won't come in second have you got a little more class than that? and i'm not saying that i should be special i guess... if it made you happy and what do you think? when you look at me? and do you look for me? when you think of me? believe me... life....has dealt me better like sour grapes... you really want to spit out swallow them up filling your stomach... i can't get my fill of you... and i really don't think it is anything that you do.... and i don't want anything from THIS and i'm not just another PRETTY girl and my head is telling me and i'm not listening your there inside my mind gotta get you outta there.... and i wasn't thinking... that we would move right in... and i wasn't thinking... that THIS would last forever.... but i was just thinking.... maybe i could spend the night.... haven't been there... in soo long need to feel you... play your song.... feeling you next to me i need you to feel this place...inside... of me.... hold me....i am flying now.... i won't let go... higher...how do you do it? higher than i ever knew... but do i want you to?? i don't mean to sound confused... but early in the morning when it all comes in clear... i wasn't even that high.... and you thought you took me there... and i just wanted to get it off my chest... and it doesn't matter it all comes back to you too... 'cause you know i could love you better... you remeber that? Rock Your World never had it like that before... and to think i almost went there again.... but i saw you... and you were busy... and i didn't like the look of things so i left without saying g'bye.... Julie :) |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
I hear power chords... Kind of a 'stream of consciousness' feel to it, but with a story. And a definite sassy edge! I like the way this works, Julie!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ha..ha..Julie you really notice the guys...and have lots of desires and feelings....wonderful writing...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Whew......feel better???? I love this side of you...lots of power and Rock-n-Roll will live on as you do.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Awesome, Julie, love it! catalinamoon |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Trew...yes yes yes...I was trying to be a little sarcastic and yes a bit SASSY too i guess...thank you for your reply.... James~~How do you know it is I who notices THEM.....I couldn't tell you all about how it is between me and "THE GUYS" because this is just a short reply....but i will say MOST of them seem to start things they just can't finish....they have their head in the clouds i guess.... Mark....YES...I did feel better after writing this....it always does the trick....I usually write to get things off my chest....and that night i had alot to get off of my chest and you think is good you should have read the e-mail I sent him..  I DO NOT think he is going to write...hhhhmmm oh well.... and again Mark...thank you so much for replying.... ...and i do hope to live as long as rock n roll will live.... Thank you Cat...(for short) I hope it is ok that I call you that.....? Thank you for reading and replying I am glad you liked it... < !signature--> Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed this one JulieAnn ... therapy from the pen I call it, and boy it sure does feel good doesn't it? I think your point came came across nice and clear (must have been quite an e-mail) Well done!Best wishes, /Kit |
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