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No Escape
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No Escape |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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In the brink of black Lies all my truths Kept away from reality Spirit crashing in the rain Inside the exterior Hunger rushing through Acid skipping across my soul No words lie here alone Lost in a vacuum to forget Demon stealing all the sense Haunted by all that is lost Either in flesh or thought Tapping on the mind Only felt in feelings Locked in a void Not taken to hold Bitterness enraged Crushing bones Bruising love Contradiction in being Spiraling down in chaos Bottomless structure Entrapped without escape Forever in captivity "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a haunting and powerful render Justbleu! Incredible imagery of pain and loss ... the words ached across this screen. You've expressed this sorrow well. Take care ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent my friend. . .it's horrible to feel that way. . . Superb poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spiraling down in chaos Bottomless structure Entrapped without escape Forever in captivity Damn Justbleu, extremely intense piece, excellently written, I wish you well my friend and hope the pain passes. Sit down and bargain "Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A great piece of work.... WOW regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Powerfully intense emotion-letting. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is one powerful piece. Loved the force behind it and the flow was sheer delight. Nope no escaping it....gotta love this one.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You all....it is sooo difficult to find the words to describe my feelings. But, when I go back and read your comments I realize that I at the very least got the basic feeling across...it surprises me. It helps soooo much to write and then to share with you all cuz, you all seem to care. Thank You my friends!! Take Care, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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