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The Agony of a Broken Girl
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The Agony of a Broken Girl |
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Denali Silverwolf Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 11 |
The Agony of a Broken Girl See the agony of a broken girl Her heart already bearing the scars of pervious wounds Trembling now with red weals as lashing tongues tear her apart Proud warrior, end your fight You can never win They'll never let you... Her cursed blood feeds the feilds of faded white flowers Faded like her innocence and purity They forced her into the image they had chosen for her They destroyed her ture self Shaping her destiny to the one they saught Caring naught if it went agianst all her dreams, desires and wishes They ignored the heartfelt cries... She who once climbed trees and roamed the hills Finds herself entrapped by the strict confines of scoicety She who once knew the rythem and beauty of her own soul Lives in a realm that forbids self expression She awakes to the cold, beraved dawn Living in a frozen mold Tired of living alie No longer free to feel And the Broken Girl Who's hopes, and live and dreams Have been shattered by a dying world Calls upon the cold embrace of the star studded night To bring her into sweet oblivion ~*Denali Silverwolf*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I very much loved this piece...makes me feel sorry for her!! I often feel in ways such as what your thoughts portray!! Thank You sooo much for sharing this so I could read!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing....I enjoyed reading this...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is probably the most meaningful poem I've read here today, and I've read a lot. I did, however, make a suggestion to your private e mail, I hope you don't mind. Loved this, keep writing. Kathleen |
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