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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-09-02 09:22 PM


The grapes in the vat
STOMP STOMP STOMP
How grody is that
A callous and corn
Foot disease airborne
I've suffered a Boone
You'll be pretty real soon
Please don't Wine!

© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-09-02 09:46 PM


LOL ... always a treat to read you Walt! This is a great little gem to brighten the night! Now if you don't mind ... ummm, I think I'll stick to beer!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-09-02 10:08 PM


Thank God I don't drink wine!
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3 posted 2000-09-03 12:26 PM


Wasn't that a good year??   LOL  

Great job Walt!!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Meadowmuse
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4 posted 2000-09-03 12:42 PM


Delightfully icky, Walt.  

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-09-03 01:08 AM


You WOULD post this during grape season, wouldn't you...?
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6 posted 2000-09-04 10:01 PM


Hey my buddy, not neglecting you, neglecting everybody...and loved this one...and I say instead of aging the wine, we get really agile elderly people to stomp the grapes---waddya think?  grins to you, m'friend...
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7 posted 2000-09-04 10:29 PM


Well Walt...

thanks for the image lol

K

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