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Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 16
Reno Nv.

0 posted 2000-09-02 04:09 PM

I will

Speak with your eyes
I will understand you
Listen with your heart
I will tell you
Flood me with love
I will drink you
Open your soul
I will feel you
Open your heart
I will taste you
Open your arms
I will hold you
Just be you
I will love you

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-02 04:52 PM

Nice simple plea to love one in their purity.  Very nice.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-02-2000).]

Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2000-09-02 05:05 PM

Welcome to Passions, Toyy... This is a wonderful entree - Check your email for a special greeting..
Marge Tindal
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-09-02 05:17 PM

Welcome to the posting side of Passions.
A nice entrance.
Please make yourself at home and
read the works of many.
Nice to have you here.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~

English Rose
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211
Berkshire, England
4 posted 2000-09-02 05:22 PM

Well done Toyy...a nice first piece
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since 2000-05-31
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5 posted 2000-09-02 08:06 PM


     Welcome to Passions   What a simple and so sweet entrance to our world of poetry you have made.  I hope to see more.


Kit McCallum
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-09-02 08:25 PM

Welcome to Passions Toyy! What a lovely and serene first post, tender and romantic ... I hope to read more!  

Best wishes,

Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2000-09-02 08:37 PM

Lovely poem! I enjoyed it and will look forward to reading more from you. Welcome to the family!  
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
8 posted 2000-09-03 05:42 AM

Welcome to passions. This poem was good enough to eat.
Be well

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
9 posted 2000-09-03 05:45 AM

Toyy!!! welcome to passions.....this site is the best thing since Rock -N- Roll....
I hope you like it as much as I do...great choice for a first post...most people like 'em short and sweet with alot of meaning....and this is definitely that... although most of mine are rather long....anyway take care and I loved the post!!!  

Julie :)

Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 16
Reno Nv.
10 posted 2000-09-03 11:58 AM

Thank you all for the warm welcome! I have been reading the poetry here for some time now and I do have my favs! I am hoping the inspriration will come back to me (dont know where it went!)
Mark...Love and purity...hmmm nice but hard to find these days, thanks
Nan...thank you very much for the email and greeting  
Marge, English Rose, rose petals, Kit and Poet Devine...thank you again for your kindness!!
Kethry...PLEASE DON'T EAT MY POEM! Let me put it on an ice cream cake first! Thank you and you be well too  
JulieAnn...Thanks and I hope I put a smile on your face!

Jeffrey Carter
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Member Elite
since 2000-04-08
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State of constant confusion!
11 posted 2000-09-03 06:51 PM

Great poem Toyy

Welcome to Passions

since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
12 posted 2000-09-03 11:01 PM

i like this short and made me smile when i read the final line  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- rlt

Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
13 posted 2000-09-03 11:11 PM

You made a grand entrance here with this poem - a simple, yet a very beautiful one at that.  Love should be this way for always between two people.  I look forward to more poems by you  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Nikolette Sadness
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.
14 posted 2000-09-03 11:23 PM

welcome to passions....i like this poem alot...a little bit too happy for me but nice...hope you like it here  


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
15 posted 2000-09-03 11:33 PM

Hello Toyy. Allow me to add my welcome along with the other poets  

I will be reading you  


"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley

Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
16 posted 2000-09-04 12:29 PM

WELCOME! You've done a great job with this!

Now that you've joined us, I hope to see more posts!   Maybe that muse will come back  

since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
17 posted 2000-09-04 12:40 PM

~A lovely start made at Passions....Hope to see more of your works..~

Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

18 posted 2000-09-04 02:13 AM

hi TOYY...

I WILL enjoy reading more of your poetic rhymes...


BTW this one is an embracing read!

since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
19 posted 2000-09-04 02:59 AM

Toyy, a very fine beginning here at Passions.
Welcome to a wonderful place.
I hope to read more of your works in the future.


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