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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-02 12:26 PM



A Little Touch O' Denim

~*Marge Tindal*~

Funny thing struck me
when reading poetry about women
It's all purtied up in silk, satin and lace
rarely in a touch of denim

Oh, I can do the frills
and the fancy-dancy frocks
But give me a touch of denim
and I'll knock off your socks !

I'll be your maiden fair
with lacey bows and such
But let me have my denim
and you'll know my wildest touch

Something raw and wild
can be found in this quill of penning
Deck me out in the fabric of my life
A Little Touch O' Denim




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1 posted 2000-09-02 12:40 PM


Hi Marge,

No can do....women are satin, lace, soft whispers, fresh air after a rain and etc.  At least, in my opinion.  I loved your poem and know exactly what you're saying in it, but I'm a romantic as you already know.  Good work, my friend.

Michael


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2 posted 2000-09-02 12:44 PM


Now, Michael~
Denim can be all the above .....
AND MORE ! !  

~*Marge*~


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juliet_2u
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3 posted 2000-09-02 12:50 PM


Woohooo you go girly. I gotta agree. Something to be said for them there blue jeans. Great piece my friend.
Juls

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4 posted 2000-09-02 01:50 PM


  
Yes.....YES!!!!!  Give me jeans and bare feet anyday!!  Marge this is simply the greatest......you are sooooooooo good!!!!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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5 posted 2000-09-02 01:56 PM


No problem Marge, I love women in denim.  Great poem!!!  You've said a mouthful for most of the women I know!

BTW Marge, saw a wonderful poem dedicated to you on Scared Moons' homepage..."One Who "Walks-The-Fire"
Neat!

jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 09-02-2000).]

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Now this is a poem I can relate to, denim lets the wild side of me out. Not the office manager, not the neat and tidy mum. None of those feel free, but put me in denim and pow, I'm back to the days of Uni and sunshine. Well done Marge lovely poem, of course because you wrote it, so it would be. And all the others out there, will be remembering their denim days.  
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7 posted 2000-09-02 02:16 PM


Oh, Marge, I love your poem
And everything it means
From what I know about you
You have fantastic genes!  

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Juliet~
You got it, gal !
My granny said - /pip/Forum20/HTML/001845.html

Sunny1~
Thanks, gal !
You'll also enjoy the above referenced URL !

JWesley~
Thank you and thanks also for the observant eye !

Marsha~
Yahoo !
Seems I've let a stampede of wild feelings free !

Balladeer~
You're soooooooo cute !
~*Marge*~




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9 posted 2000-09-02 03:38 PM


Now thar ya go.  A gal in jeans is tha only way ta be.  Tight fittin demin huggin all dem femine lines.  YYYYYYeeeeeeHHHHaaawwwww!!!!! Now this is what I call a poem.
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10 posted 2000-09-02 04:01 PM


YEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!  Oh Marge, thank you, thank you, thank you....... Satin and lace may to no harm, but let me wear denim and I'll show you my charm..... woooohooo gotta love this one my friend.  Bonnie
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11 posted 2000-09-02 04:10 PM


This tickled me -

Great poem Marge

I've often said - when a woman is beautiful to me (regardless of physical attributes - or the lack) - I will sincerely tell her - she'd look good to me -even in a burlap sack.
I will now add to that -"or denim"  

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12 posted 2000-09-02 04:16 PM


LOL...you softie you...the first thing my hubby of 20 years said on our first date was: "you going in that?...I like a gal in jeans and sweatshirts...that's what's sexy!"
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13 posted 2000-09-02 04:37 PM


Cowboy~
Now why'd ya' suppose I'd have figured you'd like this one ?
LOL !

Bonnie~
Bonnie !  Bonnie !
Settle down !  LOL !  
I sure do love your enthusiasm !

Wilfred~
Oh, yeah ... great 'pick-up' lines.  
Burlap's nice too !

Karilea~
Well, Hon ...
Ya' musta showed him something ...
he bought the whole parcel !  LOL !  
~*Marge*~



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14 posted 2000-09-02 04:37 PM


Marge.....Didn't you know it it's not the packaging that counts, mind you I DO so like a nice pair of jeans.   Great work, as always!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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15 posted 2000-09-02 06:44 PM


OK - I could be talked into a compromise
Denim by Day
Satin by Night

Nice one, Marge..

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16 posted 2000-09-02 07:09 PM


Marge,
This is

ABSOLUTELY

WONDERFUL ....


regards,
sudhir
(   and I thought they were nerds when they made a movie called JEANS in India...   )

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17 posted 2000-09-03 11:41 AM


EagleOne~
Oh, I know it alright !  
Thanks, my friend.

Nan~
Tee-Hee !
OR the other way around ?

Sudhir~
LOL @ 'nerds' !
Love ya', my buddy.
~*Marge*~


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18 posted 2000-09-03 11:48 AM


wow! you got pants on the mind, lately, huh? hehe...

seriously, enjoyed... i'm a denim girl myself... barefoot and bluejeans.. hmmm... but add a little leather and lace and ummm... well... i don't know... hard to explain... but Why Not?

rambling here. sorry... enjoyed your poem  

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19 posted 2000-09-03 07:48 PM


Now I know why they call this place Passions, especially when I read a poem like that.....I don't know how you do it Marge but I think you knocked my socks off.......or something like that......great poem!!! wild and free!!!
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20 posted 2000-09-03 08:18 PM


Marge
You go girl! Lace has it's place, but jeans make a girl really feel like a queen!

Deb


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21 posted 2000-09-03 09:12 PM


How about denims with a little bit of lace trim?....hehehe.....cute poem, Marge!  

Denise

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Doreen~
Barefooting it here too !
Lace in place !  

ETHome~
See ! That's what I promised !  
Thanks for the neat reply !

BloomingRose~
Queens lace !
I love it !

Denise~
Glad to see the gals liking the idea
of denim n' lace !

Thanks all ! Y'all sure make it fun to write !
~*Marge*~


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23 posted 2000-09-03 10:14 PM


great poem Marge..and color me denim too! Marcy
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24 posted 2000-09-04 03:08 AM


Marge, this one just tickles me...

But between us gurlz let's speak the truth leather N demins RULE!!

DaNi


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25 posted 2000-09-04 09:10 AM


Marcy~
Tee-Hee !
I would've figured you as 'sister denim' !

Dani~
Glad to catch you with a giggle !
~*Marge*~


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Marge~ this is great, I love the 'idea' of all lace and silk and what have you, but I feel more like me in my blue jeans.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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27 posted 2000-09-04 06:06 PM


SEA~
I know just what you mean !
Kinda sexy comfort !
Thanks for popping in.
~*Marge*~


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28 posted 2000-09-04 06:16 PM


Very sweet, Miss Marge...I enjoy a soft pair of jeans now and then...and they feel sooo good sliding off... (oops!)  

~ no name to protect the innocent  

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29 posted 2000-09-04 06:39 PM


Ms. No-Name~
LOL !
Sliding off of WHO ?
You tickled me with that reply !
~*Me*~


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Marge-
   Don't know how I missed this one the first
   time around, but I'm sure glad I found it
   today.     Give me a comfy pair of jeans
   over satin and lace anyday!  This is
   great!!  I love it.  

   love ya,
       -vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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31 posted 2000-09-27 03:38 PM


Vicky~
Glad you caught it, gal !
Thanks for the reply.
~*Marge*~


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